Lets take a look at a plan for an IELTS opinion essay.
Below you will find an essay question, an essay plan and also questions for you.
IELTS Essay Question
Some people think that children should spend their free time doing homework, while others believe it would be better for children to participate in sports activities instead. What is your opinion?
IELTS Essay Plan
Below are notes for an essay plan. The notes show what the content of each paragraph will be.
Introduction:
People have different views as to whether children should spend their free time doing homework or playing sport. In my opinion, children should be encouraged to take part in sport and exercise.
BP 1:
Sport is good for children because it benefits their health. Add supporting details.
BP 2:
Children can also benefit in other ways from playing sport by learning to unwind and meeting new people. Add supporting details on each point.
Conclusion:
Restate opinion.
Question for You
Think about the essay question and the essay plan, then answer the questions below.
- Is this a good plan?
- How do you think it can be improved?
Answers
Post your answers in the comments box below.
I will post my comments on Wednesday. That gives you all two days to post your comments 🙂
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