Positive or Negative Development: IELTS Model Essay

An IELTS model essay for positive or negative development questions. It is common in IELTS writing task 2 to be asked to choose either something is a positive or negative development or trend. Your task is to answer the question in the introduction and explain your answer in the body paragraphs.

IELTS Positive &Essay Question

Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

IELTS Model Essay: Positive or Negative Development?

An increasing number of people meet and talk to their friends online instead of in person. In my opinion, this is a negative development which can lead to isolation, potentially harmful situations and also problems later on in life.

One serious problem that can arise from people socialising online is that it can lead to isolation. Before the internet, people would frequently go out to meet friends, for example in cafes, bars or restaurants, whereas now people prefer to stay at home alone, chatting online. As a result, people are starting to spend the majority of their time alone at home in their room without meeting others. Isolation of this kind is not healthy and can sometimes lead to depression and other issues.

Another issue is that meeting people online can be risky. In other words, people can assume fake identities online as well as hide their true characteristics. This is particularly concerning for teenagers who are impressionable and can easily be led into dangerous situations. Furthermore, as this interaction is online, parents have no way of monitoring it and protecting their children.

Finally, socialising online can end in difficulties years later as conversations and shared photos that had been forgotten reappear. This situation is currently critical for many people, again especially for teenagers who do not think carefully before posting online. That is to say, information which is put online can remain there forever and while people may share intimate communications with close friends, these words can then resurface later on leading to much embarrassment.

In conclusion, although it has become more popular for people to socialise through the internet, it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend.

Examiner’s Comments: This essay provides a clear answer to the essay question. The position is clearly presented in the introduction and also explained and supported throughout the essay. Linking devices are well used and ideas are organised logically. Language is flexible and accurate. This would reach band 9. (Word count = 286)

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  1. Hi Liz,
    firstly, thank you so much for sharing your expertise and knowledge freely.
    my question is: some teachers categorize Task 2 questions into only 4 primary types,
    the so called “Opinion” / “Discussion” / “Opinion-Discussion” / “Situational (Direct Question)”
    and then suggest paragraph and content planning based on those.
    For example, it is recommended to NOT discuss both views in the “Opinion” type, which includes
    what you’d usually call “positive or negative” questions as well as the plain
    “what is your opinion” questions, and so on.

    What is your take on this kind of classification? is it too broad? or just broad enough?
    (this might or might not be relevant, but I’m aiming to improve my band score from 7 to 8, so I tend
    to be extra vigilant when it comes to these types of guides/tips)

    • It makes no difference how a teacher categorises essays. The key aspect is if you feel fully prepared for all essay types. I break it down into five essay types, but within those five there are more variations. But again, there is no right or wrong – there is only full preparation or not enough preparation from a candidates perspective.

  2. Hi Liz,
    Please if you don’t mind, can you summarily help to suggest how to go about this kind of question if we meet it in the exam. It seems to be a bit confusing in the approach expected.

    “People born today can expect to live longer than people in the previous generation. What are some of the positive and negative implication of this phenomenon”

    • This is a simple advantage and disadvantage essay. It is asking for both sides = one body paragraph for each side.

  3. Mam my local teacher has taught me that positive negative and adv outweigh disadv essays can be written with same style.
    Is it a right approach?

    • Yes, it is possible to do that – it would be a partial agreement where you admit one side and favour the other.

      • Sorry, I forgot to mention what my teacher writes in the outline of positive negative essay—
        In this essay advantage outweigh disadvantage

        If it is still right then can a person score a 8 band with partial agreement?

        • You don’t get a particular band score because you chose a particular approach. Your score is based on other marking criteria. Even within Task Response it is about how you present ideas, how you use them, how you support them, much development you give them etc. Scores are not so simple to predict or estimate.

  4. Dear Liz, I want to say a big THANK YOU for all your work. Your website is really helpful .I followed your tips many times and the explanations you give is so easy to be understood by everyone (even for those who have poor english😉).Keep going and don’t listen to those persons who are too frustated to understand the actually meaning of this website.By the way, tomorrow I have the second atempt for the IELTS test.The last one was overall 7 ,but W=6😕.Hopefully this time I will take it with at least 6.5.😁Many thanks again and hope you are feeling better now.😘😘

    • Fingers crossed tomorrow!! Remember that you need to take time to plan your task 1 and task 2. Then writing will be easier. Also keep your eye on the clock so that you manage your time properly. See this page for last minute tips on each section of the test: https://ieltsliz.com/ielts-exam-tips-on-the-day/.
      I’m really glad you found my site useful 🙂

  5. Hi Liz,

    Can we consider this kind of essay (Is this a positive or negative development) as an opinion essay when answering? I am asking just because I need to be clear on when planning this type of essay.

  6. Lovepreet singh says

    Hello mam
    Can i apply a balanced opinion approach to a negative or positive development essay
    Like you have done in the advanced video of the opinion essay

    Q- more and more measures to improve security in urban areas have been introduced in many countries because of the increased crime rate
    Is it a positive or negative development?

    Increasing level of crime rate have promoted authorities in many countries to strengthen their security through a variety of measures. While Some of these measures pose potential risk to individual privacy, I feel that their benefits to city residents and cities as a whole make these changes a positive development overall.

    BP1– POSITIVE EFFECTS lowering of crime rate
    Which has increased sense of safety
    Attract more investments

    BP2 NEGATIVE privacy intruded
    Agencies can access call details
    However this concern is undue, authorities have no self vested interest
    So chances of this is extremely low.

    In conclusion, although some of the security measures have been introduced infringe on people’s right to privacy, it is largely a positive development as the improved security makes city dwellers’ lives more secure and cities more desirable place to live, work and invest in.

    Could u please clear my doubt?
    Is this a right approach

  7. Hi, can you help me? I just did my ielts test yesterday, and i’m so on the edge about my writing task 2.
    So here’s what i got:
    “Nowadays people tend to buy well-known brand products. Why is that? Do you think its positive or negative?”
    (I’m sorry i can’t remember precisely, but the main idea is about branded products)
    The reason i’m contemplating whether i did correctly or not, is because i only did one view of the question. I only gave negative thoughts, forggeting about the positive one. And i didn’t remember whether they asked for “negative OR positive” or “negative AND positive”.
    And can u tell me please, what mark will i get for this? I’m really really hoping i would get at least a 6. Thanks.

    • This would affect your score for Task Response which counts for 25% of your writing task 2 marks. That means the other marking criteria would not be affected by this. You would probably get about 4 for TR because you only partially completed the task. However, you must not worry. You probably have remembered correctly which means writing about the negative side only would have been fine. Good luck with your results 🙂

  8. Hi Liz,

    The way I prefer to answer these types of question is:
    Body 1 negatives
    Body 2 positives
    Conclusion: Since the positives outweigh the negatives it is a positive change or vice versa.

    Is this a correct approach? Or does it have to be one dimensional like the example essay above?


    • What do the instructions tell you to do? Do the instructions as you positive OR negative. Or do the instructions say to give both the positive AND negative and give your view?

      • Liz, I think you are not sounding clear here. In the above query by Lovepreet (29th Feb) you have told it’s fine to have a ‘balanced approach’ (Positive+Negative) That question also has ‘OR’ in the question. But here you sound against the very same approach. Isn’t this conflicting?

        • The comment made did not say they were writing balanced approach and for this reason I made my comment. It is fine to have a balanced approach (which means partial agreement or specific view point) or a one sided for these essays. But you can’t turn it into a discussion essay which means you give both sides equally which is what that comment showed.

  9. Thank you, Liz! Your tips and suggestions are valuable and precious. I’ve gone through some of them and they’ve really helped me get an idea of what an IELTS test is supposed to look like. Thank you, once again, for generously helping many of us!

  10. Hi liz
    I am an IELTS trainer and I constantly goes through your site and finds it very beneficial.Recently my students gave IELTS exam and they got question as follow:
    Nowadays men’s sports are given far more attention by society as compared to females.What are the reasons for that? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?
    Now my question is I always told my students two answer such questions in two paragraphs.Body paragraph one stating reasons and body paragraph 2 saying whether it is a positive or negative development…And I know that my students have excellent writing skills,but both of them got 5.5.I couldn’t believe it.Can you please tell me whether answering this way is wrong or fine?This will help me to guide in future,especially regarding going for reevaluation

    • It’s absolutely fine to answer that way. The reasons are in one body paragraph and the pos/neg opinion will be in the second body paragraph. Getting the right paragraph structure is only one of many steps to getting a good score in IELTS. It is completely possible to get band 5 and still have the right paragraphs. Their band score will be based on the ability to extend ideas, using a range linking words, not making mistakes with linking words, connect ideas back to the issues given, grammar range, grammar accuracy, punctuation, vocabulary range, choice of words, avoiding learned phrases, poor paraphrasing (this means over paraphrasing) and spelling. So, you see, there are many reasons they might have got 5.5.

  11. Hi Liz,

    How this essay can get 9 bands. As it starts with negative and ended with positive development. “considered as a positive trend” (Conclusion)

    I believe, the opinion must be the same throughout the essay.

    • Please read it again carefully:

      “…it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend.” = “too many problems for this to be positive” – this means it is not positive at all, it is negative. It is an advanced level of English.

  12. Hi liz
    Could you tell me in these types of essay we can go with one side or explain both positive side and negative side

  13. These days,majority of people prefer socializing online instead of face to face interaction.In my opinion,it definitely is a negative development which will pose potential harms to the social health of community.

  14. This essay is 242 word long, will it get 9?

  15. Hi Liz
    “Is this good or bad thing?”

    How do we categorize above within types of essay you mentioned over your website ?
    Is this “Positive or Negative” essay OR “Direct Question Essay” ?

    • Direct questions include “positive negative”. It could be any direct question or questions. “good or bad” is the same.

  16. Hi Liz, I just took the IELTS on the 6th and 7th of January 2018. I just can’t state it exactly but as far as I remember ….
    My Writing Task 2 topic was:
    Many people spend money, and not save. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?

  17. Nita Aprilia says

    Thank you so much, Liz! I really appreciate all your works.
    Best regards from Indonesia!

  18. I guess you are not interested in my comments and keep deleting them. Whatever the reason I’m not leaving comments any more
    Thanks anyway

    • I am not able to answer over 10 thousand comments that are waiting for me. I work alone and I am human – on top of that I am seriously ill. If you are not happy with the 300 pages of tips, lessons and videos that I provide for free, that is your choice. Sometimes

      • Dear Liz,
        Please do not be distracted. Some of these comments can dampen one’s morale. Just keep up with your good work of serving humanity. You deserve a Nobel Prize. Much Obliged!

        • Thanks. Sometimes such comments do make me tired. But you are right – I should just ignore them 🙂 Thanks for your support and kind words 🙂

  19. Hi Liz,

    When it comes to a Negative or positive kind of an essay, can we say some this is both+ and – and support both sides in the essay. Is it also correct?

  20. Hi Liz!
    Probably you have been asked this question a lot of times but can I write that something has both positive and negative effects and still state that it’s more like positive, for example (in positive/negative development essay)? Or should I stick to one side only?
    Thanks in advance

  21. Hi Liz,

    Evan here, I think it should be “negative trend” instead of positive trend at the last part, I mean the last phrases..’it has brought too many problems for this to be considered as positive trend..” in the conclusion. Please correct if I’m wrong or not.

    • “it brought too many problems to be positive” This means there were so many many many problems that it is not positive. This is the meaning of that sentence.

  22. Leoni Spilker says

    Hi Liz,

    first I would like to thank you for your support and informations you offer to all students around the world! Your homepage is fantastic!!!
    I bought your advanced lessons for the writing part but I am still not sure when I have to state my opinion and when not to…
    It is obvious to give my opinion when the question says “Do you think../To what extend do you agree/What is your opinion….” but in the essay above the question is “Is this a pos. or neg. development?” I don’t understand why I should give my opinion. Do you have any advice, when to write/not write my opinion?
    Thanks in advance,

  23. Gita Sharma says

    Hi Liz,
    i am in a serious mess. One of my students inquired me about ” the positive or negative development question” and it was ‘Can we write that it has both positive AND negative development in the introduction? Though i have told her that we can’t as the question asks us either positive OR negative, not AND. But, i am still in doubt.Please answer!

    • Students need to be very careful that they don’t change an opinion essay into a discussion essay. You are right the instructions ask “OR” which means to choose. With these essays, the easiest way to deal with it is to choose one side and have a main point for each body paragraph. As you can see , in my model essay above, I have chosen one side.

      It is also possible to choose a specific opinion (balanced view). This doesn’t mean that something is both negative AND positive. It means you express in exactly what way it is negative and in what way it is positive – a very quantified and specific view. This technique is only possible with high level students who have the English ability to present this type of view. Any lower level student will make a mistake and WILL get a lower score as a result.

      So, from a teacher’s perspective, it is better to encourage them to go for a one sided view. Unless you have very high level students who can deal with a specific view point.

      • Hi liz
        I wrote an introduction on this essay.Do you think i should change it related to conversation you had above?
        ”Presently an increasing number of people meet with their friends online instead of facing each other.In my opinion altough this provides some easiness , this is a negative development which can lead to social isolation and also possible damaging situations.

  24. Hi Liz!
    Your lessons are very helpful and I enjoy learning from you.
    I would like to ask about positive or negative development question types.

    From Cambridge 8 Test 2 material:
    “Has this become a positive or a negative development?” – Is it correct to explain about EFFECTS/CONSEQUENCES or have I misunderstood the word development ?

    Thank you 🙂

    • You are asked to present your opinion – is it positive or is it negative. Your whole essay should explain your view.

  25. Hi Liz,
    In a positive or negative development essay, could we able to write a balance approach?

    • A balanced approach does not mean you sit on the fence. You must have a clear position, a clear opinion which you explain.

  26. Hi Liz,
    I can see you’re inundated with questions here. Sorry to drop another on your lap.
    In your conclusion you didn’t use ‘opinion’ words, but rather stated the conclusion as though it were a fact i.e. you didn’t say “in my opinion”..
    I infer that you think this is ok, even though I steer my students away from this. Are you working on the basis that it’s implied that it’s your opinion or in fact, do you believe it’s a fact.
    [Interesting to note your use of rephrasing twice (body para’s 2 and 3)]
    Great site.
    PS I’m a Kiwi. How did you find NZ?

    • Hi Mark, yes, I’m just implying. As the whole essay is about my opinion, it therefore follows that my conclusion summarises exactly that. However, by all means recommend your students to make their opinion clear in the conclusion as well. Teachers are always best to give advice that steers students of all levels in a safe direction.

      I loved New Zealand. I did my teacher training in Auckland Language Center and also travelled around North Island. Unfortunately, I didn’t see much of South Island. Hopefully will do on another trip 🙂

  27. Hello! I want to ask a question for positive and negative essay…
    Do i need to answer both positive and negative sides o the issue or one side is enough? thanks in advance

    • Have you read the instructions carefully? Does it say “AND” or does it say “OR”. Is it asking for both or is it asking you to choose? Read the instructions.

  28. Hello Liz, if the question asks ” what are the positive and nagative effects on the trend ” do we have to discuss both negative and positive sides ?

    • If it asks for positive AND negative, you give both. If it asks you to choose “is it positive OR negative”, you need to express what you think.

  29. Gita Sharma says

    Dear Liz,
    Can i start my introduction with “it is true that” if the question asks ‘is it a positive or negative development?’

  30. Gita Sharma says

    Dear Liz,
    whenever we get a question of “positive or negative development”
    are we supposed to follow POSITIVE , NEGATIVE OR A BALANCED APPROACH?
    Do we have the liberty to write “I firmly believe it is a positive exercise in introduction” and state the negatives in the first main body paragraph and write positives in the second main body paragraph followed by a positive opinion in conclusion?

    • It is asking for your opinion. You decide your own opinion based on the issues given. Of course you can choose to say you think it is only positive. Your view is your view. The examiner is looking for a clear position with main points that support your view.

  31. Alaa Alshammari says

    Dear Liz
    thank you for your useful sit,however in the last sentence of the conclusion paragraph, i think it is a negative trend not positive, is it?

    • I’m glad you checked with me. This sentence is correct. “it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend.” when it is written “too many problems to be consider positive” is means that this can’t be positive – there are too many problems. Does that help?

  32. Hi liz, I have a question I would like to ask you. I´ve seen an statement that said: “Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.”
    A part from arguing pros and cons, is this asking for my personal opinion? thanks in advance!:)

  33. Anil Shrestha says

    Dear Liz,

    The question did not directly ask for the opinion or view but instead for positive and negative development. In such question do we need to give our opinion?

    • It does not ask for a positive AND negative development. It asks if you think it is positive OR negative. This means you need to choose what you think – that’s an opinion.

  34. Mohamed Hindam says

    Will I be penalised if I use the academic style for solving GT task2 writing?

  35. His Liz,first of all I want to thank u for ur lessons.I recently appeared for ielts academic exam in kerala ,India.My writing task 2 was;Nowadays children likes to stay with computer games rather than outdoor activities.Why is this?State your view as it is a positive or negative development?

  36. Can we write both opinions in Positive or Negative development essay?

    • It is asking you to choose and explain your view. If it asks about family and individuals, one could be positive and the other negative. But if it asks about one thing, then you can’t have both. This isn’t a discussion essay.

  37. Hi Liz,
    I wanna say thank you for providing such helpful material and tips for us. I took my IELTS Test yesterday and got this model of task 2 in writing.
    The question was (I can’t remember the exact words):
    ‘More and more people are travelling to another countries. What is the cause, is it a positive or negative development?’
    The test was held in Indonesia, just wanna share hope it helps 🙂

  38. hi Liz that’s a perfect site.is there any lesson about punctuation marks?i am suffering from this

  39. There is a typo in the last sentence.

    … for this to be considered a positive trend.

    I suppose it should be a negative trend.

    • I’m glad you are thinking carefully about the meaning of language. This sentence “it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend” is actually correct. The words “too many problems” is negative which means that there are so many problems, it can’t be a positive trend.

  40. Hi Liz. In your essay example above, you state your opinion (positive/negative) and give the reason for the opinion in the introduction. What if the question ask for the cause of some issue and also the trend? What should i state in the introduction? Both or just one? And how do i arrange the content in the paragraphs? For example: what is the cause for this issue? Is it a positive or negative development?

    Thanks in advance. :’)

    • It’s trick with cause and solution because you usually have two causes and two solutions so it’s too much to write it all in the introduction. You could give the causes and add “solutions must also be considered” so something like that. Then do the reverse for the conclusion.

  41. you are the best teacher……

  42. i have given IELTS test in Abu Dhabi writing task 2
    People are drinking more sugar based drinks. what are the reasons and how to prevent it.
    Writing task1 was
    The table gives information of population aged over 60 in 2000 and prediction of aged population in 2050 of six continents (asia, africa, europe, south america ,north america, oceana.) and the whole world…same as the one you have given in one of the sample ….

  43. Tara Bahadur Wanem says

    I am really proud of myself getting a real guider like you for my IELTS preparation. I want to get some more tips and ideas from you so that I can do my level best in IELTS exam. Thank you so much Liz.

  44. Hi dear Liz. Can you help me I have just one question. Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from government in order to continue with their work. do you agree. … What does ‘artists’ mean in this essay? just Painters or musicians , sculptors as well ? Thanks in advance.

    • The word “artist” covers most creative professions. You can highlight that in your essay with examples.

  45. In this type of essay, I am still allowed to give own opinion ? It is not required

    • This is asking for your opinion – it’s asking you to choose.
      All the best

      • quang anh says

        thank you !

        • Dr. Sharif says

          Dear Liz mam,
          Here the question is, is it a positive or negative development? . Author likes to answer as negetive deveopment and gives detail description why is it negative development.
          My question is, why does he not write a paragraph on its positive development? is it necessary? is it only acquired in both view discussion question?
          Thank you for your good job.
          Best regards!
          from Bangladesh

          • The instructions do not ask you to present the positive AND negative developments. The instructions ask if you think it is positive or negative – you need to choose and present your opinion. Be very careful that you understand the difference between essays which require you to discuss both sides and essays which require you to choose.

  46. can we support for both positive and negative.finally , in conclusion we say that there are more disadvantages than advantages……….


    This topic comes to me yesterday in my ielts test 🙁

  48. Hi Liz. are you gonna post your (do the advantages outweigh disadvantages) band9 example essay?

  49. Hi Liz. can I present both positive and negative trends in my essay.

    • You can either choose a one sided approach or a balanced approach but don’t go for the balanced approach unless you have been trained how to write it.
      All the best

  50. Hello Liz, I had this type of question in my last exam. The question is- Children are given more freedom nowadays as compared to the past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

    Can we answer like

    Intro- while some people believe it is a positive development , I strongly disagree their view ( making my stance clear in the essay)

    1st body- Some people believe it is positive dev for several reasons- firstly,…… Secondly……

    2nd body- however, I strongly delieve there are more detrimental effects, one of the major reason is,……. Another reason is…… Finally…..

    Conclusion- although there are few benefits I personally feel that the demerits of this outweigh the advantages.

    Pls comment on this, is this acceptable?

  51. Hi Liz,

    I just wonder that whether we should use chat online instead of chatting online in 2nd paragraph of this essay since it can be a verb to present second action after “people prefer to”.

    Thank you / Thu

  52. Hi Liz,
    If am writing a positive /nigantive essay like this one above, do I write about only negatives if I think that the negatives are more or do I write about both of pros and cons and then say my opinion?…
    Do I say my potion in separate paragraph, or I say it in the paragraph that I agree with?….. Plz answer me I really need this?…..


    • It does not ask you to discuss both sides. You answer the question – which one do you think “positive OR negative”.

      • Amin Chowdhury says

        Dear Liz,
        Yesterday I took General IELTS. My writing task 2 was that some people use some languages and these are disappearing in some countries. What are the reasons? Is it positive or negetive development?

        I wrote the some reasons with following your problems and solutions structure. I took the position of negetive development. I didn’t mention anything about positive develop. In conclusion paragraph, I mentioned only how can solve this.
        Am I in correct position?

  53. I hope I can write my essay as good as this. ☺

  54. Hi Liz,
    Is it okay to combine BP 2 and 3? thanks

    • I wouldn’t combine them. They are different points – one is about danger and one is about sharing personal information. Also it would make the body paragraphs unequal if you combined them.

  55. Dear mam,
    Thankyou for your lessons.may i ask you two doubts.1)while writing body paragragh can we include two or three points in same.For eg.if we need to state reasons for an opinion essay, can we include two reasons and its explanation in one paragraph by using firstly and secondly.2) whether it is neccessary to put a counter argument for agree diagree essay.

    • Each paragraph must have a central theme. Keep ideas logically organised. If it is an opinion essay, the whole content of the essay explains your opinion and nothing more.

  56. Liz,

    When will your next course be finished (I bought both already).

    Are you an examiner – present or past? Thanks!

  57. Dear teacher,

    I’m a little bit confused this question. Should i give my opinion or should I discuss both point of view? What I’m trying to say is that whether opinion essay or discussion essay.
    To tell you the truth, I can’t make a distinction this question if opinion essay or discuss essay.
    Could you explain a little bit more, please?
    Thank you very much!

    • This question is asking you to choose “or” not to give both “and”. Read the instructions “positive or negative”. When you choose something, it is your opinion. So this is asking you to choose a side and explain why you think that.

  58. Hello from Brazil Liz,

    First of all, I would like to thank you for your tips. It is very helpful and has help me a lot.

  59. hello Liz ,
    I just wonder the type of the your answer , because that type Of essays came to me in my last exam and I did not estate my opinion directly (as I thought the question did not ask to give personal opinion , I thought it needed a general answer) , is that right to answer this type of essay questions with general point of view not personal point of view??
    If I were wrong ,that would illustrate why I had 6 in my last exam however I was sure I did quite well :)=======I am trying to figure out my mistakes

    • Any questions that asks you to choose between two options, is asking for your opinion. It’s a personal choice and you must state your choice in the introduction and explain it in the body paragraphs. This is one of the biggest reasons why students fail to get the score they want.

  60. I tried writing my opinion on the essay and my last point is not too clear to me so i was wondering if u could check it out for me. This is the last point stated below.

    Online friendship makes it possible for one to experience the new and advanced trend that technology is depicting to the world. Technological advancement is moving the world to a different direction, and the only way to abreast oneself with such advanced improvement is to stay connected to the global network and a way of doing that is to keep up with this change.

  61. TON THAT HOA says

    “This is particularly concerning for teenagers who are impressionable and can easily be lead into dangerous situations.”

    Hi Liz, I think there is a small mistake in the sentence: led must be used instead of lead because it is in passive voice.


  62. Hi Liz,

    For this type of question, do I always need to choose positive or negative?
    Or can I say, for instance, that this is positive for individuals and negative for society?


    • Yes, you can say that one aspect is positive and one aspect is negative. This is called a balanced approach where you quantify your opinion. If the essay question was only about society, you should just choose one side.
      All the best

  63. What score would you give for this essay?

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