Hi guys,
Below are the answers to yesterday’s lesson on proof reading for writing.
- Research in space explorations can lead to new cutting edge technology.
- Answer: There are two problems with this sentence. “space exploration” is uncountable and therefore there is no “s” needed. Also the word “cutting-edge” requires a hyphen when it is used as an adjective but not when it is used as a noun. In our sentence, it is used as an adjective.
- Full correct sentence: Research in space exploration can lead to new cutting-edge technology.
- Improving handwriting skills is still essential even in todays modern world.
- Answer: There is only one mistake in this sentence. The word “todays” should have an apostrophe = today’s.
- Extra comment: “Improving handwriting skills” is a noun phrase and is singular. Therefore the verb is singular.
- Full correct sentence: Improving handwriting skills is still essential even in today’s modern world.
- Increasing number of people are choosing to to travel by car rather than public transports.
- Answer: There are two mistakes in this sentence. An article is missing at the start = an increasing number & “transport” is uncountable so no “s”
- Full correct sentence: An increasing number of people are choosing to travel by car rather than public transport.
- If students are involved in making decisions about how a school is run it might lead to problems.
- Answer: There is only one mistake in this sentence. The sentence needs a comma to divide the clauses.
- Full correct sentence: If students are involved in making decisions about how a school is run, it might lead to problems.
- While some people think that children should be given more homework, others believe that children should be free for enjoy their leisure time.
- Answer: there is only one mistake with this sentence. The proposition is wrong: for = to.
- Full correct sentence: While some people think that children should be given more homework, others believe that children should be free to enjoy their leisure time.
Summary of common mistakes
Uncountable nouns: This is one of the most common mistakes in IELTS writing. Students do not pay attention to them. See this list of Uncountable Common Nouns
Gerunds and noun phrases are singular. A gerund is a verb+ing which is used as a noun and it is always singular. See the video below to see an example of this.
Articles: “a” and “the”. So many students miss articles. The most common mistake I see is: “Government should …”. The word “government” is a noun which requires an article. “The government should …”. Always review your articles.
Punctuation: Don’t forget your commas between clauses 🙂
Video Lesson
Making a complex sentence: Using a gerund
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