Background Statement Practice for IELTS Essays

Practising Background Statements for IELTS Introductions

Below are four essay questions that appeared this month (December 2018) in IELTS writing task 2. Under each essay question are model background statements. You will see the different ways you can paraphrase the essay question.

All IELTS writing task 2 essay introduction paragraphs contain:

  1. Background statement = a paraphrase of the essay question
  2. Thesis statement = your position or main points

This lesson will give you practice at paraphrasing essay questions to make a background statement. Below you will find 4 essays with model background statements and a list of tips to help you.

IELTS Background Statement Practice

Paraphrase the essay questions below to create one background statement. The first one has been done for you as an example with three possible options. I would like you to write a background statement for questions 2-4.

Essay Question 1

Science will soon result in people living to an average of 100 years or more. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Model Background Statement for IELTS:

  1. People’s lifespan is increasing due to developments in science and it is thought that people will soon have an average life expectancy of 100 years or longer.
  2. Due to the development of science, people’s lifespans might be extended to 100 years or even longer.
  3. People may one day live to be 100 years old or more owing to the development of science.

Essay Question 2

Some people prefer online classes, while others think it is better to be in a traditional classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Model Background Statements:

  1. While there are people who prefer to take part in online courses, others believe that traditional classroom teaching is by far superior.
  2. Online course are very popular with some people, however others still consider teacher led classrooms as the most effective way to learn.
  3. Although online courses are preferred by some people, there are others who firmly believe that learning should take place in a classroom face to face with a teacher.

Essay Question 3

Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, few actually achieve this. What solutions can you suggest?

Model Background Statements:

  1. It is a common problem that people struggle to find a healthy balance between their work and other areas of their life.
  2. Finding a balance between work and other areas of life can be a challenge that some people struggle with.
  3. While many people wish for a healthy work-life balance, few are able to realise this.

Essay Question 4

There has been an increase in the number of children and youngsters committing crime. What are the reasons for this and punishments should they receive?

Model Background Statements:

  1. The number of crimes involving children and adolescents has risen over recent years.
  2. Children and teenagers appear to be involved in an increasing number of crimes.
  3. It has been observed that juvenile crime is on the rise.

Tips for IELTS Background Statements

  1. Don’t write a very long background statement. It doesn’t help your score to do that and wastes valuable time.
  2. Try to write your background statement as one complex sentence. to do that, use a clause and correct linking.
  3. Don’t paraphrase unless you are 100% sure your word is perfect. Not all words can be changed in English. Be selective when you paraphrase. Paraphrasing is a skill about when to change something and also when NOT to change something.
  4. Don’t aim to impress – aim for accuracy instead.
  5. You don’t always need to start your background with “some people..”. See all the options above.
  6. You should not start your essay with overused expressions that are popular with low level English users, such as “In the modern era,” or “With the advent of modern technology..”
  7. Avoid learning expressions which you think will impress the examiner “A hot debate..” / “a burning question..” “a highly controversial issue..”. The examiner is trained to spot these learned expressions. They don’t help your score and show a lack if individuality in your language. You need to write each sentence in your own words, unique to yourself.

I hope you found this lesson useful 🙂

All the best

Liz

Comments

  1. 2.While there are persons who choose to take part in online courses, others believe that traditional classrooms are by far superior.

    3.There is a considerable number of persons who are working hard to create harmony between work and their personal life, although, few are able to realise this.

    4.The number of preteen and young adults responsible for crime has growth recently.

  2. Many people spend their time and effort in discovering the ways to achieve a work-life balanced lifestyle. But the count of people who achieved the milestone is minimal till date.

  3. Abhishek Singh says

    It has been seen that lifespan of the people is on an increase and it is assumed that the life expectancy of humans will approach 100 years or more because of the near developments in science.

    Comments please.

  4. Abhishek Singh says

    Although is it very common for people to study through digital mode of learning but few people believe that conventional approach of study outweighs other modes of study.

    Guys trying first time please respond or try to correct.

    • Nishat Tasnim Toosty says

      Despite the great availability of the digital mode of study, the belief that the conventional approach of study is the best also exists.

  5. Abhishek Singh says

    Although it is very rare than one lives above the age of 80 years but with upcoming developments in science it is being assumed that people will have a life expectancy of about 100 years.

  6. Q2= online class have become a preferable mode of learning by some people however some people still believe learning in a classroom is better.
    Q2= finding a balance between work and other aspect of your life has become common although only some people are able to achieve this.
    Q4 crimes involving children and teenagers are on the increase.

    • Devender singh gill says

      Good attempt but there are number of grammar mistakes in your statements.
      You can do better by avoiding these minor inaccuracies.

    • Nishat Tasnim Toosty says

      Q2= Although online class ha gained popularity among people but classroom learning is still preferred by some people.
      Q2= A balance between job and other aspects of life has become a challenge to find which is achievable by only a few people.
      Q4= Crimes are increasing among the children and teenagers.

  7. Huairen Zhang says

    1. It is a common problem that people struggle to maintain a balance between work and other social activities. Although people try to solve it, little is getting progressed in their endeavor.
    2. While a lot of individuals choose online education, there are still many people who hold the opinion that traditional face to face learning method is more superior than online learning.
    3. The number of crime committed by children and teenagers has increased in recent years.

  8. 2. Although online courses are preferred by many, others consider that classroom-based learning and teaching is the most effective way to gain knowledge.

    3. Finding a balance between work and other areas of life can be difficult to some which only a few have succeeded.

    4. The number of crimes committed by children and teenagers has increased significantly over the years.

  9. Faith Nyamadzawo says

    Essay 2
    Use of traditional classes and online classes is still debatable among people because of different views in advantages and disadvantages towards both learning techniques.

    Essay 3
    People find it difficult to archieve an equilibrium between work and other social life activities.

    Essay 4
    A high rate of Crime has been recorded due to children and youngsters being involved in criminal activities at a tender age.

    • Essay 2 :
      People have different preferences for attending classes. Owing to the benefits of learning in different ways, some are inclined towards online classes and few are towards traditional classrooms.

      Essay 3:
      Some of many who struggle to maintain balance between their work life and other sides including family and friends, succeed in their purpose while rest of them do not.

      Essay 4:
      A high rise in the crime rate of childern and teenagers is recorded.

  10. 1.Most of the students would rather like traditional classes than online classes to gain knowledge
    2.Large number of individuals really can maintain the equilibrium either side of their jobs and other side of life ,while others find it difficult to do so .
    3.Due to several reasons,the rate of committing crime has been increased among juvenile and adolescents .

  11. 1.Most of the students would rather like traditional classes than online classes to gain knowledge
    2.Large number of individuals really can maintain the equlibrium eitherside of their jobs and other side of life ,while others find it difficult to do so .
    3.Due to several reasons,the rate of committing crime has been increased among juvenile and adolecents .

  12. 1. With the advancement in technology and due to a comparatively busy life, people consider online coaching as one of the best option to gain knowledge.
    2. Work and life balance is a mandatory requirement in the present scenario where people must allocate their time wisely.
    3. Crimes among teens and children are increasing day by day due to their exposure to such environmental views through media.

  13. Essay 2: Online classes are being favored by a few people, though, some are of the opinion that classroom based is still better.

    Essay 3 : Many people have been trying to find equilibrium between career and other facets of their life, though, a small number successfully attain this.

    Essay 4: The number of youths perpetrating crime is on the rise./ The number of youths and adolescents doing unlawful acts is on the rise.

  14. Kamran Shaikh says

    Essay 2 – Preferences of the people are diverting towards opt for online classes due to advancement in information technology plus saving time in comparison to be present in normal routine classes. on the contrary, others believe to learn better and productive in physical classroom.

    Essay 3 – Life of the many people has been tended to be hectic and exhausted, many of them are struggling to get equality or parallel between their work and rest of their life in terms of family, friends, and social activities.

    Essay 4 – Population has been rising tremendously, causing more demand for daily consumption and basic requirements of life with limited resources. This may lead to increase in crime ratio for teens & youngsters.

  15. Prajim lama says

    1) Answer:
    – Certain people follow online education system due to advance technology .Whereas others are still in favor of learning in physical classrooms.
    – It is because traditional education system have greater sense of responsibility and high interaction, however it lacks some modern facilities while compared to ancient education such as less flexibility and fewer choices. This essay will discuss both view and give the opinion.

    2)Answer:
    -Some people attempt to focus on multiple chores such as job and other activities like education.While, certain people are able to accomplish this success because of their ability.
    – There are some solution to keep focus on both work and they are hard works and proper time management .

    3)Answer:
    – The felony done by the adolescent are raising day by day.
    – The reason behind this problem is due to poverty and illiteracy .In my opinion, I think the punishment should be given by looking the background of their family.

  16. 1. Online classes are getting popular these days, still there are people who think that traditional classes are better for learning.

    2. Most of the people struggle to maintain a balance in their work and personal life, however there are some who know the art of how to achieve that balance in life.

    3. In recent years there has been a rise in the number of crime committed by youngsters in our society, which is a matter of great concern for all of us.

  17. #Although online classes are liked by many however, some people still like to study in traditional classes.
    ## Mostly people like to maintain balance between life at workplace and at home but only few of them succeed.
    ### It has been noticed that Juvenile crime rate is excelling.

  18. Amadin Humphrey says

    Hump
    Q1. A number of people like online lectures while some feel it is quite advantageous to have conventional lecture halls.
    Q2. Many people strive to achieve a balance between their job and private activities.
    Q3. There is rise in juvenile delinquency.

  19. 2.It is true that tuitions over the internet are more liked by some whereas traditional classrooms are still preferred by many .
    3. Although most of the people struggle to maintain a balanced life, in terms of job and other aspects, only few are able to experience it in their lives
    Many try hard to have a balanced life, despite the fact that just a few could actually achieve it
    4.Adolescents breaking the law is on the rise than ever before. Poverty and media are two causes for this.

  20. Priscah Ndlovu says

    Q2 (a)Online classes are gaining popularity with some people compared to the ancient classrooms which are still the favourite to some though.
    (b) while some people opt for the online classes, there are some who still consider the olden classrooms as the best.
    Q3 Finding a balance between work and other social life issues is a challenge with some people.
    Q4 It has been discovered that crimes committed by juveniles are on the increase

  21. 1.There is a fierce debate among individuals that whether the online classes are better or tradirional classroom. I,however,believe that traditional teaching contribute to the overall development of a student . 2.In present scenairo, work-balance life is,undoubtedly ,a dream for many people and usually they fail to achieve this.The best way to maintain it is effective time management. 3.The crime ,nowadays,is more commited by children and youngsters.The reason behind this is more liberty and pocket money they have ,undoubtedly ,punishment is highly required so thet afraid from commiting crime again.

  22. Essay question:1
    Online classes are preferred by a few people whereas a group of people believes that it is a good way to learn and teach in the traditional classroom.
    Essay question:2
    The majority of people efforts to seek a balance among their daily activity and other aspects of their life.Although, some individual can be gained with a good plan, focus, time management.
    Essay question:3
    Nowadays, the number of attempting crime has been growing by children and youngsters.

  23. Essay 2.
    In recent years, online classes have lured a lot of people among the student community than the conventional classroom studies. Since our classrooms are brought to the living room, it provides a great opportunity to everyone who wish to pursue their studies at their own pace and at anypoint of time in their life.

  24. Pamela says,
    Qst 2. Technology has expanded such that few individuals believe that internet classes is preferable, however, on the other hand, others opine that the orthodox way of learning is better.
    Qst 3. The burning question of the day is whether or not there should be an equilibrium between work and life, although it seems that only some faculty could achieve this.
    Qts.4. In recent times, there has been a tremendous increase in crime rate. Unfortunately, little ones and teenagers are said to be perpetrators.

  25. Chandrasekhar Reddy Anam says

    1) With the advent of modern technology in to education sector, some people prefer to attend the online classes while others still believe in traditional classroom system

    2) Most of the people are struggling to find balance between their work and personal life, while only few achieve this

    3) Recently there has been a huge exponential growth in children and youngsters committing crime

  26. Comparing online classes with traditional ones has divided people in 2 groups

  27. Oba Ojeifo-Kenneth says

    1. Certain individuals appreciate electronically connected classes, whereas others are of the opinion that to be present in a conservative classroom is preferable.
    Pls reply.
    2. Numerous people attempt to fathom a balance between their occupation/job and and other departments of their life. Notwithstanding, not too many attain this.
    Pls reply.

    3. There has been an increasing number of adolescent/juvenile and young adults perpetrating unlawful act.
    Pls reply.

  28. Essay Question 2:
    Even though many people prefer to enjoy old- style schoolrooms, virtual courses are becoming rife among some individuals.

    Essay Question 3:
    Making a balance between one’s profession and other facets of life is considered as an optimal issue. Many people, yet, may find it challenging to attain.

    Essay Question 4:
    It is said that the rate of delinquency among teenagers and adolescences has escalated

  29. Q2: It is considered by some that traditional way of learning such as to sit in a classroom is the most effective way while there are others who gave preference to study through internet in online classes.

    Q3: Most people are trying to spend their life by keeping a balance between their work and other routine matters but unfortunately there are few who actually manage it successfully.

    Q4: The number of crimes which are committed by young kids and children are increasing day by day. This is mainly due to computer games and crimes news. Instead of punishment they need proper counselling.

  30. 1.
    People’s have different view about excellent methods of learning between virtual class and face to face study. While web-based learning is new technology for distance education, I completely agree with those who believe traditional method is best.

    2.
    It is true that people are experimenting in different ways to maintain harmony in their jobs and social life. Although some achieve this, being punctual on time can be taken as to mitigate these problems.

    3.
    The large population of teens and secondary level student are increase in criminality. The reason behind this is due to freedom given by family, however good parenting can reduce this potential problems.

  31. 1.Nowadays, the majority of people have resorted to studying online rather than attending classes.

    2. It is a challenge to many people these days to maintain their work and other aspects of life at equilibrium.

    3.The statistics have reported high crime rates committed by teenagers and adolescents.

  32. Q2. Population views on preferred mode of education are divided into two subgroups, while, one section of it tend to lean towards online mode of study, the others section prefers the old classroom based approach.

    Q3. Finding the optimum division of time between work and other life activities is what the majority workforce searches for perennially, but those who eventually finds are not many.

    Q4. The rate of younger population namely, children and youngsters, indulging in criminal activities has been on an upward trend.

  33. Q2. The effectiveness of studying online is debatable. Some people prefer to study online while others feel it’s better to attend lectures in school. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provides evidence as to why studying online have gain momentum over time.

    Q3. Balancing work with other human activities is debatable. Most individuals find it difficult to have a balance between their work and social life. This essay will discuss why people are having imbalances and provide a solution to a stable life.

    Q4. The growing number of children committing a crime is getting popular. This essay will discuss the cause of the increase in crime and proper judgement for such child

  34. Q2 / while many human being like online sesstions. Others belive it is better in traditional classrooms.

    Q3 / Alot of human being attempt to have a balance between their job and other obligations of their life. However rerely could achieve that.

  35. 2. While online classes are some people’s choice , others are comfortable with a traditional classroom.

    3. Most people are not able to find an equilibrium between their work and life.

    4.Children and youngsters involved in criminal activities are on the rise

  36. 2)Due to the development in technology, classes via the internet getting more preference by some people whilst others believe having classrooms in conventional style is far effective.

  37. 1. Some individual favors online education, while others would argue that old-style learning remains desirable. Although online classes cut travel time from home to school, I believe that traditional classroom provides maximum knowledge through personal interaction between teachers and student.
    2. Several individuals attempt to balance work and personal life but, only limited people really accomplish this. The most viable solution is public awareness campaign warning people against the danger of overworked.

  38. Essay Question 1: Some people prefer online classes, while others think it is better to be in a traditional classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

    Background statement: opinions differs among various people as some argue that internet classes are better than traditional classes, while other believe in opposite.

    Essay Question 3
    Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, few actually achieve this. What solutions can you suggest?

    Background statement: Although many people tend to achieve a work-life balance, only a small proportion could, in fact, succeed in achieving it.

    Essay Question 4
    There has been an increase in the number of children and youngsters committing crime. What are the reasons for this and punishments should they receive?

    Background statement: Number of children and youngsters, who are committing crimes, are on the rise.

  39. Sukhjeet Singh says

    Essay(2) it has been observed that e learning classes are gaining more popularitythan regular classes and highly preferred by students nowadays.However, it is argued by many that regular classes are irreplaceble and more beneficial for learners. I personally believe that traditional classes offer safe, postive and productive learning environment to students.

  40. conde djiba says

    1-Although distance learning is preferred by a large proportion of our community , physical learning is thought to be an effective method of learning by some people.

    2-The equality between employment and lifestyle seems to be a real challenge for people and not many of them overcome this test.

    3-There’s no doubt that the number of juvenile criminal has increased considerably at the current time .

  41. 2. The conventional teaching method is more preferrable by number of indivuals than attending classes done online.

  42. Namrata thakur says

    Nowadays many people opt for online courses than traditional method of teaching .In my opinion online education is more convenient than classroom lectures. I have explained my points in the following essay

  43. Essay 2
    People have their own preferences when it comes to , whether they want to choose online or traditional classroom classes.
    Essay 3
    Finding a perfect balance between one’s work and other dimensions of life is aimed by many but is actually achieved by few people.
    Essay 3
    A rise can be seen in the number of children and young folks who are getting involved in crime related activities.

  44. 2)Due to the development in technology, classes via the internet getting more preference by some people whilst others believe having classrooms in conventional style is far effective.
    3)An increasing number of people tend to have balance in their official life and other perspectives of life although a few of them are able to acquire this.
    4)Committing a crime by the young age group of people and children has been increased over the last few years.

  45. 2)Due to the development in technology, classes via the internet getting more preference by some people whilst others believe having classrooms in conventional style is far effective.

    3)An increasing number of people tend to have a balance between their official and other perspectives of life although a few of them are only able to acquire this.

    3)Committing a crime by the people of young age and children has been increased over the last few years.

  46. Ahmad Hamodat says

    Q2: Although getting information became easy by using internet websites, According to some people, others, still prefer to learn in auditoriums.
    Q3: getting the time necessary to make a balanced activity through the day, be no longer controlled for many people, While, some people keep their activities scheduled.
    Q4: strict laws solution is one of the matters, should be taken into consideration to reduce the recklessness among young children.

  47. Evelyn M Nwankpa says

    1, Many people prefer to study online whilst, others believe it is better to be in a conventional classroom. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion in the following paragraphs.
    2, Most people try to find harmony between their jobs and other aspects of their being. However, only a minute of them actually successfully accomplish this. This essay will suggest some way this can be achieved.
    3, In recent time, the number of children and adolescents committing a crime has increased. This essay will discuss the possible reasons and a penalty they should receive

  48. Hi Liz, please find the below paraphrased sentences and post your comments
    1) peoples life span might increase to 100 years or more due to development of science.
    2) some people think traditional classrooms are better, while others prefer online classes.
    3) Few people only achieve balanced between their work and other aspects of their life, inputs of many people.
    4) Number of children and youngsters commiting crime has been increased.

    • Pamela says,
      1. Technology has expanded such that few individuals believe internet classes is preferable. On the other hand, others opine that the orthodox form of learning is better.
      2. The burning question of the day is whether or not there should be an equilibrium between work and life, it seems that only few people could achieve this.
      3. In recent times, there has been a tremendous increase in crime rate. Unfortunately, juveniles and teenagers seems to be the perpetrators.

  49. Nebula Castelino says

    Hi Liz,

    I have been following your work for a few months and would like to thank you for all your advice and assistance. You have helped me improve and achieve my desired score in reading and helped enhance my listening and speaking scores 🙂 It is an uphill battle with writing unfortunately.

    I was wondering if there is a typo in essay question 3 as the question reads as “Many people try to find a balanced between…”.

    Here are my background statement paraphrases:

    Topic 1: Due to the advancement in science, it is expected that the life expectancy of a human being will be greater than 100 years.

    Topic 2: Some individuals are of the view that online classes are better than traditional classrooms, while others uphold a contrary opinion.

    Topic 3: Many individuals strive to achieve a healthy work-life balance. However, the success rate of achieving this is low.

    Topic 4: There has been a rise in the number of crimes and offences being committed, especially among children and youngsters.

    I look forward to your reply.

  50. 1. While a number of persons prefer virtual classes, others opine that onsite learning remains desirable.

    2. While majority of people strive to strike and maintain work-life balance, only a minority have been able to achieve this fit.

    3. Increasing number of children and adolescents are engaging in delinquent behaviors.

  51. Essay 2 : It is generally accepted that people chooses online learning than the traditional learning method. I believe that both learning styles has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay will examine the both learning method in detailed.

    Essay2 : Work life balance is a daily challenge in most people’s life. While some people are able to split their timing between friends , family and other activities of their life , in addition to the demand of the workplace, others still find it difficult to make it. This essay will provide some possible solution to achieve it .

    Essay 3 : Juvenile delinquency has been increasing over the past few years. The two main causes of this increase in crime rates are modern technologies such as internet , video games and busy lifestyles. I think that all convicted criminal should be punished based on the severity of crime commit.

  52. 2. Some persons would rather internet learning whereas some other people would prefer the conventional classroom teaching.

  53. Aseem Bhardwaj says

    Many people believe in the advantages of conventional classroom training while others choose online classes.

    People strive to achieve work-life balance in their daily lives but only a few can make a reality for themselves.

    An increasing number of children and youths are seen indulging in misdeeds resulting in higher crime rates.

    • 2, In some people’s opinion online classes are better, while others prefer the conventional face to face classroom teaching. 3. A lot of people attempt to strike a balance between their job and other areas of life. But only a handful accomplish this goal. 4. There is a rise in the population of children and juvenile deliquency. This essay will examine the reasons for this and necessary punishment.

  54. Aseem Bhardwaj says

    Many people believe in the advantages of conventional classroom training while others choose online classes.

    People strive to achieve work-life balance in their daily lives but only a few can make it a reality for themselves.

    An increasing number of children and youths are indulging in various misdeeds resulting in higher crime rates.

  55. 2 while online classes is viewed to be better by some group of person, the conventional face to face method of learning is preferred by some people. This essay will discuss both sides of the opinion

    3 finding a balance between busy working schedule and private life has become a major project for most people although few people end up accomplishing this in life. This essay will elaborate on the causes of the problem and provide solutions.

    4 THE involvement of children and adolescent in crime of resent, has increased at an alarming rate. I will enumerate the causes and solutions to this world wide problem.

  56. 1. Gone were the days when teaching was restricted to the traditional classroom setting as now, with the increase of technology, teachings are conducted virtually from any and every part of the world efficiently and effectively.

    2. It has become increasingly impossible for a lot of people to create a work life balance as a result of the rigors associated with their work, timing, and other external factors.

    3.

  57. Increasing the number of children’s crimes is sometime due to the treatment of parents and give children what they want at any time to the extent that rates of drugs and stealing anything became a disturbing matter.
    Punishment should be suitable for what children do even if a responsible person punish them to get over this problem

  58. 1. A certain portion of the population believes that education by the web technology; however, some believe in the old style, class base.
    2. A number portion of the population considered to making similarity among of their occupation; besides, alternative features in their lifestyle; nevertheless, a small number of the population reached that.
    3. It has shown a raise remarkable murdering by youth and minors; therefore, how can find any cause; moreover, is it better to penalizing hem?

  59. Q2:
    Education sector is no exception where modern technological advancement has brought about changes in every field. However, the debate to find which is better, online education or traditional face to face education, is ongoing worldwide. Online teaching and learning, in my opinion, cannot replace the human interaction based education methods under any circumstance.

    Q3:
    The modern life style has expanded the peoples’ responsibilities among many roles, where the work life requires most of the peoples’ time leaving them struggling to find a balance between work life and other aspects of life. Regardless of which part of the world, first world or third world, people try to find a solution but unfortunately many do not succeed. This essay will consider the potential solutions for this condition.
    Q4:
    Juvenile crime has become such a critical problem drawing attention from all over the world that many judicial systems are considering different punishments and methods of rehabilitation to correct these young offenders. People suggest various new methods and punishments to orient these youngsters in the right direction.

  60. 2. while some individuals will choose taking their classes online, others are of the opinion that learning in a conventional classroom is better.
    3. Quite a significant number of individuals have tried balancing their career and other areas of their life. But unfortunately only a few have succeeded.
    4. The proportion of children and young adults who commit crime has been on the increase.

  61. Hamza Amina says

    Online classes have eased the learning process considering the percentage of people who have earned qualification.

  62. 4. Nowadays children and juvenile crime are rising gradually, consisting large proportion of crime rate.

  63. 2. Due to development of technology nowadays some people prefer to study online, whereas the others still believe in traditional ways of learning a subject. 3. Majority of people are willing to spend time equally and wisely between their job and personal life, but only minor number of them have achieved it.

  64. 2. Due to development of technology nowadays some people prefer to study online, whereas the others still believe in traditional ways of learning a subject.

  65. Due to development in science, people’s lifespan will be extended to 100 years or more.

    Although it is sometimes thought that traditional classrooms are better, some people prefer virtual classrooms.

    Balancing work and other aspects of life are what most people try to achieve, while only a few succeed.

    The rate of crime committed by children and adolescent are on the rise.

  66. 2)AS PER THE STUDENTS LEANING CHOICE, SOME ARE CHOOSING VIRTUAL CLASSROOM METHOD, AND OTHER GROUP GOING WITH FACE-TO-FACE CLASSROOM.

    3)MOST OF THE PEOPLES ARE STRIVE TO MAINTAIN THEIR PERSONAL-PROFESIONAL LIFE. IN THIS ONLY FEW ACHIEVE.

    4)NOWADAYS, INCREASING CRIME RATE AMONG CHILDREN AND YOUNGSTERS ARE HIGH.

  67. Maulik Patel says

    1, Due to advancement in science technology, Mortals may be living more than 100 years.

    2, One side of group argue that, it is good to have distance learning education while using internet. However, other side of group’s opinion is, outmoded classroom is the best teaching method.

    3, world has become smaller due to changing in people’s lifestyle. people face challenges in keeping their both, work and personal lifestyle on the same page but only some can manage this.

    4, it has been observed that number of children and youth have committed some serious crimes that puts justice system to think that, what consequences should they face?

  68. essay 4
    1-the increase rate of crime among children and teenagers has been continously shooting.

    2-Now a days the crime rate is shooting day by day specially in early age of youngsters.

  69. Lady Johannah Mangwai says

    Some people think old method of classroom teaching is best whereas others prefer online education.
    Many people are facing challenges between their daily work and other aspects of their lifes and a compromise has to be reached.
    There is an increase in crime which is committed by children and youngsters

  70. essay3
    1.a true balance in people life ,is the most difficult task for which he was struggling but unfortunately not many people succeed in achieving it.
    2.To have balance between the work ,family and friends is found to be so much difficult and a little people can achieve it in their life.

  71. 2. The discussion on prefrence of virtual learning as compared to classic methods has shown a divide between the two methods.

    3. Although, there are less individuals that can harmonise their toil and existence, most individuals actually put in efforts to harmonise their toil and existence.

    4. Figures of criminal activities amongst kids and adolescents has been on the rise.

  72. essay3
    1)a true balance in people life ,is the most difficult task for which he was struggling but unfortunately not many people succeed in achieving it.
    2)To have balance between the work ,family and friends is found to be so much difficult and a little people can achieve it in their life.

  73. Hi Liz ,

    I take this oppurtunity to congratulate you and thank you so much for all your support these days .I would prefer your videos are more worth than anything and you should continue that always.

  74. Essay 2
    1)A few people consider that learning through different programs on internet is more preferable while the rest opinions are in the favour of old style educational rooms.

    2)few people give preference to get classes through internet while others are in the favour of old normal class rooms

  75. 2. It is considered by some inhabitants that attending online classes is more convenient, while few other people are of the opinion that it is good to attend conventional classroom sessions.
    3. A large number of people attempt to strike a good balance between professional life and personal life, while there are others who actually achieved the same.
    4. Of late it has been observed that there has been an augmented participation in crime by many children and teenagers.

  76. Modupe Esan says

    Q.2: Due to advanced technology, most people prefer to receive lectures through virtual classes, but others prefer one on one classes. I believed that there should be a balance while receiving classes through both means.

    Q3:

  77. 2. There is a debate over preference of virtual tuitions and traditional face to face interactions.
    3. Whilst most people aim to strike a balance between personal and professional life, a handful of them are able to attain it .
    4. Children and youngsters are involving in punitive actions in droves.

  78. Dear Liz,

    Thanks a ton for your help. I had given my Gt exam few months back and just by watching your videos , I got 8.5 bands in speaking but 6.5 in writing ( which is shockinh for me as i dont know where i went wrong) and I want your guidance on writing.
    I will be extremely thanful to you😊

    Please see my Introduction and guide me where i stand and what is to be corrected.

    In the today’s era, internet has become such an indispensable part of people’s life that online tutoring is preferred by a few fraction of society . However, there are myriad people who still believe that traditional teaching methods are better. In my opinion, face to face learning is vital for the overall development of a child.

    • I didn’t plan to comment on individual writing, but for you I will make an exception. You obviously have excellent English, but you are not writing in a natural manner. You are writing in a forced way to impress the reading. This is the wrong way to approach IELTS.
      1. Don’t use “In today’s era” – this is common with low level students. Just start normally and directly “The internet has become..”
      2. Don’t use “a few fraction of society” this is actually incorrect English. Just write “some people” or “a proportion of people”.
      3. Don’t use “myriad people” it is both overused and incorrect. You should have written “myriad of people” (preposition of). But don’t use it anyway.

      Your aim to write naturally and avoid errors. All errors or poor word choices will lower your score. Now check my model answers above and see how logically and sensibly you should approach your writing.

  79. Question 2
    While some people think that traditional or face to face teaching is the best method of learning, others prefer having their classes online.
    Question 3
    Having a balance between work and other activities of life is what many people try to find but this is a goal only few achieve.
    Question 4
    It’s been on record that there has been an increase in the rate of crime committed by children and young persons.

  80. Ahmed Elghandour says

    2- However, many learners trust in the online tutorials, there are others who still believe in ordinary teaching classrooms.
    3- However, people do their best to organize their life and get the benefit of each item they have, many of them are not able to create an optimum life.
    4 – An increment in the crimes that are carried out by teenagers and children is observed.

  81. 1 In this age of technological advancement some people select online classes while others prefer the traditional ones .In my opinion virtual classes are easily accessible , time – consuming and much efficient than the physical classrooms.

    2 In this highly competitive and pressurised life most people try to equalise the professional and personal aspects of life but few succeeds.

    3 Nowadays the number of children’s and youngster executing offences has highly raised. Their are many reasons for such social evils and strict laws should be enforced in order to curb these.
    3

  82. Adeel Johnson says

    Essay question 2
    Background statement
    Online education is preferred by small group of people while on the other hand others believe that getting education in classrooms is more beneficial.

  83. Kennedy Nweke says

    Although a lesser number of individuals would want to study online, majority would rather opted to learn in a classroom.

  84. Ankit Joshi says

    1. Due to modern technological era, people choose to learn from online classes method. However, other prefer the conventional classroom teaching is better for learning. In my opinion, I prefer to interact in classroom with teacher to learn throughly.
    2. People try a lot to achieve work-life balance and other perspective in life but, only some can manage while, rest fail in it. Their is two effectively solution, first to give priority to leisure time prior with family. Second, take regular break from work.
    3. The number of pupils and teenager breaking the law has been raised. There are some underlying reasons for it, and I believe pushinments is not a way to resolve. But, to sent them for rehabilitation and community services will be better for them.

  85. Maka Tetradze says

    Dear Liz,
    I have been following your site for almost a month and I truly believe you are doing an amazing job. I have listened to many other online IELTS tutors’ videos but your ones are exemplary. Thank you for this.

    Now I would like to send you my sample background statements for questions 1-4 and look forward to your reply/assessments.

    Paraphrase to Q 1:
    Due to scientific research the average lifespan for people is projected to be about 100 years.
    Paraphrase to Q 2:
    It seems that online classes/lessons may be preferable for the number of people while others may still opt for traditional classroom environment.
    paraphrase to Q 3:
    Life work balance is sought by a lot of people though not all of them succeed in it/though some fail in achieving it.
    Paraphrase to Q 4:
    1.Young people tend to commit crime fairly more often than before
    2.A considerable rise in young people’s behaviour committing crime has been noticed recently.
    Sincerely,
    Maka Tetradze

  86. 2. Certain extent of people prefer online classes, while other opt to be in classroom environment.
    3. In the current environment, most people strive to strike a balance between their work and other life activities.
    4. In recent time, the crime rate has seen an upward trend among children and adolescents.

  87. Vast majority of people reckon that online classes are pregmatically more efficient but the opposition hold the opposite view .I shall elaborate the benefits and shortcomings of both the categories of education below

    • Ahmed Elghandour says

      While many people favor online tutorials, others believe in face to face interactions that are presented in the traditional classes.

  88. Although there are some who like online learning, other believe that face to face interaction is the best approach of teaching learning method.
    Despite many efforts only some people are able to balance between professional and personal life
    Nowadays,crime among minor and adolescent is increasing at a alarming rate

  89. 2. Although online classes are preferred by some, others consider it better to be in a traditional classroom. In my opinion, I think online tuition is preferable as it saves valuable time.

    3. While a great number of people try to find a balance between their work and other sides of their life, it is in fact only few who accomplish it successfully. I believe that having a part-time job, together with a monthly schedule, may help to find the golden mean.

    3. The number of crimes, committed by children and adolescents, is on the rise. There may different reasons why but I think that it is due to the bad influence of violent video games and TV films. Involving young people in sports activities outdoors may solve the problem.

  90. 1. Receiving classes online is increasingly being embraced by many, whereas, others believe that the conventional classroom is more effective.
    2. A large number of people are making effort with a view to striking a balance between work and other areas of their life.
    3. Children and teenage crime is rapidly growing in societies, a development which can be attributed to a number of reasons that will be highlighted in this essay.

  91. 2. There is a growing debate among people on the preference of internet-based classes over physical classrooms.

    3. As challenging as it has become to find a meeting point between one’s career and one’s family life, nevertheless, few people are still able to actualise this.

    4. In recent times, the number of teenagers and adolescents involved in crimes is on the rise.

    • Ahmed Elghandour says

      3 – However, many people try to reach a meeting point between their work’s requirements and personal life issues, few of them have succeeded.
      4- Nowadays, a significant increase in the number of crimes perpetrated by adolescents and teenagers is observed.

  92. Hi Liz,
    here are my answers.
    2. Where some believe in virtual learning , others prefer to be a part of traditional classrooms.
    3. Majority of human beings try to find out a balanced approach between their personal and professional life; however, only a small number of people get this.
    4. An increase can be noticed in the crime rate of children and adolescents.

  93. Here are my model answers ,please correct me if i am wrong in any of them.

    2. Few people tend to like virtual classes, Whilst others feel comfortable to take a regular classes. In my opinion, online classes are really helping thousands of people by creating a private platform. However, traditional classroom is available for all courses.

    3. People often experience hard to stabilize their job and personal life, while others can easily compensate both. In my view, by paying attention to priorities, we can achieve the balance between work and household activities. However, it is highly difficult to acquire this in life.

    4. There is no doubt that the number of kids and teenagers are involving in illegal acts has been elevating in recent times. The reason for that problem is, they are lacking the care and protection anticipated from family, which was driving them to commit the sin. Instead of punishing them, changing their behavior is the solution.

    p.s Your lectures are very helpful to me. Thank you 🙂

  94. #2:
    Internet is changing the way of learning things for various people and they prefer to learn over internet. Whereas there’s another group of people who choose classroom studies.

    #3:
    Although work-life balance is a preferred choise for most of the people, a few of them get to attain it.

    #4:
    The crime rate in adolescent people and young adults has been reportedly high these days.

  95. 2. Quite a few learners feel that lessons given online are better than those taught in a traditional setting and vice versa.

    3. Ver few among a large number of working people who strive to strike a balance between their professional and personal lives, manage to be successful.

    4. There has been a noticeable and disturbing change in recent times related to crime. Children and teenagers, or people in their early adolescence, have started participating more and more in criminal activities.

  96. Gaurav Shah says

    2 ) In the current competitive job market, most of the employed people are struggling to find the work-life balance in their professional life.

    3) Crime among children and young teenagers is on a constant rise lately.

  97. Oluwasegun Anthony Bosede says

    2. There are some number of people who have preference for online learning, but some others believe it is better to learn in a traditional classroom.

    3. A number of people tend to find an equilibrium between their job and other aspects of their life. Although, only few people do this.

    4.a)The rate at which children and youngsters are committing crime is on the increase.

    4. b) Crimes committed by children and young adults are increasing.

  98. Q2: while a group of people think it is useful to get their courses through distal learning way, others still prefer attending physically to their lessons like the old way.
    Q3: in spite of being busy with their work, a lot of people try to spend their life soundly and make a fair share between their work and leisure.
    Q4 Nowadays, the crime age has extended dramatically to younger ages than before and a lot of crimes have been frighteningly assigned to kids and adolescents.

  99. Question 2
    It is considered by many that studying on the internet is a better option than going to school, but others advocate otherwise. I strongly believe that traditional classes help students learn correct conduct and it creates an extensive diversity among them.

    Question 3
    A large number of people have been looking for solutions to stabilise both social life and work , however only small proportion has succeeded. There are a number of measures which can be put in place to balance these activities .

    Question 4

    The growing levels of children committing crime has proved to be a major obstacle for humanity . This is mainly due to difficulties in finding employment and an increase in divorce , however harsh punishment should be given to those who re-offend while community service should applied to those who are first time offenders .

  100. Essay 2:Some are of the view that it is be better to attend regular classes, others opt for classes that are online.
    Essay 3:Despite the fact that a large number of people make efforts to strike a balance between work and other aspects of their live, only a few actually succeed.
    Essay 4:The number of children and adolescents involved in criminal activities are on the rise.

  101. The trend of study has been changing everyday and there are some people who want to do it through internet and other prefer by face to face interaction in classroom.

  102. Crime rate among kids and youth has been on the rise in recent times. These could be attributed to poor parental guidance, peer group influence and lack of moral lessons in school curriculum. Parental restrictions should be put in place as penalty for offenders.

  103. 1. A few people would rather have electronically delivered lessons, whilst others consider the conventional classroom to be superior.
    2. Achieving a state of equilibrium between the demands of work versus life outside the business environment have been sought by many people. However, a few literally accomplish this.
    3. The number of teenagers and minors who violate the law has increased over time.

  104. 1.Recently, the crime rate among kids and adolescents is increasingly high .

    2. A good number of people struggle to find a middle ground between their jobs and other activities of daily living.

    3. It is considered by some that online lessons is better than learning in the classroom as opposed by others who believe that the later is best.

  105. It is believed by some people that traditional classrooms are better than smart classes . On this ground , this essay represents scrutiny on both the views and give a plausible opinion.

  106. Answers
    #2) A number of persons opt for online schools whereas, others see conventional classroom as a more suitable alternative.

    #3) Finding a balance between job and other aspects of existence is really achievable by a few persons although, several individuals endeavour to find an equilibrium between both.

    #4) The statistic of minors(Children and youngsters) involved in criminal acts has been on the increase.

  107. Essay question 2
    It is true, Online classes becoming increasingly popular these days, some would argue traditional classrooms are better than virtual classes.
    Essay question 3
    Except a few, a large section of people struggles with managing their work/life balance.
    Essay Question 4
    Recently, crime committed by juvenile has increased.

  108. Paraphrasing Question 2
    There is a dichotomy among people between learning through internet and conventional classroom training, which is considered as effective way of acquiring education.

    Paraphrasing Question 3
    It is a universal challange to harmonize professional obligations with personal necessacities, which only a small portion of the group has been able to met.

    Paraphrasing Question 4
    Number of youth involved in criminal activities is on the rise nowadays.

  109. Essay Question 2:
    Although internet lectures are most preferable by some people, but the usual classroom learning method is still considered more effective by other people.

    Essay Question 3:
    A lot of people make efforts to achieve stability, amongst their occupation and other areas of their life. But in reality, only a little number of people attain this achievement.

    Essay Question 4:
    The rate of children and youngsters involving in juvenile delinquent has been incremental.

  110. 2) Although some are of the opinion that online classes is superior, while traditional classroom is the thought of others.

    3) A balance between work life and other aspects of life has been the struggle of many, but only few could achieve this.

    4)It is a known fact that a growing number of children and youngsters have been involving in crime.

  111. question 2: Most of the people recommend online classes but many of them believe that traditional classes are good to be in a class room.
    question 3: Many people struggle to maintain balance between work and conditions of their lifestyle although very few people achieve it .
    question 4 :Crime rate is increasing among youngsters and children.

  112. Sunny wadhwa says

    Essay Question 1
    Recently due to Leaps and Bounds of developments in the scientific world, average living age will cross 100 years or more.

    Essay question 2
    These days owing to magnificent increase in Internet technology, many people prefer online tutorials however few people still love to attend brick-and-mortar classrooms

    Essay Question 3
    In order to survive in this fast growing world, it is getting hard to perform better at work as well as stabilize other crucial tasks of life in contrary some people have are of managing duo very beautifully.

    Essay question 4
    Robbery, violence and murders cases around the world are inflating exponentially, whereas contribution of teenagers and young peoples is on higher side in comparison of elder citizens.

  113. Oindri Sengupta says

    Essay 2 –
    It has been a common topic of argument for quite sometime now, whether online classes are better or the age old traditional classroom learning is favourable.
    Essay 3 –
    Work life Balance is essential for a peaceful living and everyone tries to attain a balance. While few individuals achieve it, others fail to do so.
    Essay 4 –
    Criminal activities among minors and adolescents have increased quite alarmingly in the last few years.

  114. Sehrish Qamar says

    Answer 2

    For some people, traditional classrooms are still a preferred mode of elarning however, there are some other people who prefe online classes.

    Answer 3

    Despite trying hard to keep the work and other spects of life on a balanced level , only a few people out of many become successful in doing so.

    OR

    Out of many people trying to keep their work balanced with other aspects of their life, only a few people are found to be successful in their attempt.

    Answer 4

    A growing number of youngsters as well as children are found to be involved in the criminal activities.

  115. Question 2 – Eventhough some people prefer online classes there are many others who still prefer traditional classes only.

    Question 3 – It is believed that many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of life but few of them acheive this.

    Question 4 – Committing crime is increase in number especially in children and youngsters.

  116. Answers to the background statement!

    Ans to question 2.
    Many people have varring preferences on their learning environment. While some like online classes, others prefer the usual classroom.

    Ans to question 3
    Achieving a balance between work and other aspects of life has being a challenge to a lot of people. Nevertheless, a hand full have achieved this fit.

    Ans to question 4
    The number of young people involved in criminal activities has been rising.

  117. 2. The Role of Distance Learning in our society can not be over emphasize, However, Classroom Learning has contribute greatly to the society

    3. The Balance between career and Pleasure can be actualized, Notwithstanding, it takes strategies to be achieved.

    4 Increase in criminal act has been stream line to children and youngsters in the society.

  118. 1. Human’s lifespan is expected to be an average of 100 or more with the advancement of science.

    2. There’s an increasing argument on preference for virtual classes and attending lectures in person.

    3. Many aim to achieve a level-ground between career and other areas of life but few are to successful at this.

    4. There is a high rate of crime among children and adolescents

  119. A large number of people struggle with their work -life balance, but some people gain it

  120. Layal Al Touki says

    Background statement 2:
    Studying online is being preferred by some people. however, others believe that attending classes on campus is more beneficial.

    Background statement 3:
    Achieving a balance between the job and the other sides of life is the aim of many working people. But only some of them managed to attain this goal.

    Background statement 4:
    The number of children and teenagers who commit crime is rising these days.

  121. Background statements.
    Essay question 2: Online classes are considered by some individuals as the most preferable mode of study while others see the traditional classroom as better. In my opinion, both modes of study are good depending on the amount of time an individual has at his or her disposal. This essay will discuss both options.

    Essay question 3: Plethora of individuals attempt to balance work with other personal activities, although only a few succeed in their efforts. To achieve this balance, one would need to set daily achievable goals, created a scale of priorities and inculcate time management.

    Essay question 4: Crime rate has risen dramatically among younger people. This essay will discuss reasons associated with this social vice and how it can be remedied.

  122. Ravi Natarajan says

    #2: A set of people recommend virtual classes using internet, on the other hand another set of individuals feel physical training are more advantegous. In my opinion, there are benefits and drawbacks in both the approaches. I will detail my thoughts in the below paragraphs.

    #3: Even though majoirty of workers try to obtain worklife balance, hardly certain individuals can able to accomplish that. This is due to various reasons. In below paragraphs, I will discuss those reasons and possible solutions to overcome it.

    #4: The crime rate amoung childrean and young one is growing recently due to multiple factors. I will elobrate the reasons and the ways to penalize them in subsequent paragraphs.

  123. Oladimeji Odubayo says

    2. Studying online is preferable to some people, whereas others are of the opinion learning in a classroom is a better option.

    3. Maintaining a balance between work and other areas of life is the goal of the majority of people, but only small number of people eventually achieve this.

    4. The number of children and adolescents involved in crimes has been increasing in recent times.

  124. Q2: Although some people consider that technologically advance classes are better,others believe that old way of classroom is the best.
    Q3: to lead a balance life, people may make balance between their personal and professional life. While others already lead this type life.
    Q4: the number of young people who commit crime rose dramatically from past few years

  125. 2. It is considered by many that online method for classes is convenient way, whereas some people argue that traditional classroom is essential for study.

    3. Number of people do effort to balance between their working patterns and fullfill their need, although some actually aquire this.

    4. Immense number of juveniles and adults has been committing crime, which is rise.

  126. Monica Somasundaran says

    Essay 1: Development in science will be responsible for people to live 100 years or more.
    Essay 2: Some people prefered to opt for online classes , while others believe that old traditional classroom is a better option.
    Essay3: Many people try to balance their professional life and personal life . But , very less people actually able to do this.
    Essay 4: Numer of children ad teenagers committing crime has increased recently.

  127. For ESSAY 3.
    In the recent scenario, there has been remarkable upsurge in the unlawful offences by youngsters as well as by kids. There are numerous reson behind the antisocial activity they adopt. However to curb the offenders there should be some strict law and order so this type of businesses will under control. Both the reason and antidisciplinary action should they given will discuss further.

  128. 2: The method of learning has become a controversial topic for hot debates among people with a few support the online studying whilst some others still believe in the old-fashioned classroom style. In my opinion, I argue that the textbook studies is advantageous compared to the modern method having meagre benefits.

    3: As the world progresses with tremendous growth and revolutionary changes in the way of living, commoners have to work accordingly, which they sometimes find it hard to balance with their family lives, however, few wins over this. The solutions suggesting include reducing office hours and adopting a better lifestyle.

    4: Recent years have witnessed a hike in the crime rate and the majority of convicts are either teenaged or children. Continuous exposure to violent video games and lack of affection from parents are prime reasons for this, and moral punishments such as forced social services in orphanages and imprison in juvenile cells are recommended.

  129. Musa S Danjuma says

    Answers
    Essay 2; Nowadays some people preferred internet lectures while others believed conventional method of lectures is most important.
    Essay 3; Is common today, people try to have equilibrium between work and other life activities, nevertheless only few people achieved it.
    essay 4; Recently, the numbers of young adult and children involving in criminal activities has jump up.

  130. Manisha Rathi says

    Essay 3: In today’s fast moving world,majority of people are endeavouring to discover a good work-life balance in their life,however,due to having tremendous pressure from workplace and family, hardly any is able to maintain stability.

  131. 1. As a result of the evolution in science, the life-span of people is expected to be prolonged to 100 years or beyond
    2. Due to the desire to secure the opportunity to work and study at the same time, some people would rather prefer online studies to historical classroom studies.
    3. Many people desire to find the right proportion between work and social feature of life, nevertheless, it is not easily access to everyone.
    4. There is a progressive rate in the perpetuation of unlawful acts among the children and young people nowadays

  132. Gurimder Kaur says

    Essay 2-
    Sample 1-Several individuals choose online classes for their study, whereas some believe old way of study, attending classes in university is more beneficial.

    Sample 2- certain people are more likely to taking online classes, whereas some people believe attending classes in university is always good.

    Hii Liz,

    Please make me correct whereever i am wrong.

    Thank you,
    Gurinder Kaur

  133. Answer 2 – Some learners like to study online, while others feel more comfortable in brick and mortar classroom.
    Answer 3 – Majority aspire to achieve a work-life balance but only some are able to do so.
    Answer 4 – The population of juveniles involved in misconducts has been on the high side.

  134. Alade Oyeniyi says

    2. A lot of students embraced online classes but many of them still thinks physical classroom teaching is still the best.

    3. The struggle to find an equilibrium point between work and other aspects of life is pursued by many but only few people hit the mark.

    4. Crime rate among the youths is escalating nowadays.

  135. Hie Liz,

    Thank you so much for this wonderful website to aid many IELTS students.
    Here are my responses

    1. It is commonly preferred by some, to attend online classes, whilst many think it is better with traditional classroom teaching.
    2. In this modern world, many people want their life to be balanced with work, while some individuals have succeeded to achieve this circumstance.
    3. In recent years, many children and adolescents are observed offending.

    Regards,
    Sravani

  136. Sandesh pandit says

    Thanks

  137. Adedamola Ayewoh says

    2. Although, online classes are preferred by some, others believe that being in the class traditionally is better.
    3. There has been efforts to balanced work and other life aspects by people, but only few has succeeded in this regard.
    4. The rate of crime among children has been on the rise.

  138. Manisha Rathi says

    Essay 2: Although it is sometimes thought that pursuing internet based lessons is a satisfactory approach to gain knowledge ,other people deem visiting schoolrooms for classes far better.

  139. Essay Q2..
    A traditional classroom is thought to be better though, online classes are also getting preferences due to its easy access.
    Essay Q3
    To get an equilibrium between work and other aspects of life majority of people are endeavouring their best, though only minority can achieve this.

  140. essay 2
    Some individuals prefer classes online while others believe that traditional classroom is better.

    essay 3
    Work and other aspects of life is tried to be balanced by most individuals although only few people actually achieve it.

    essay 4
    A grown in number of children and youngster committing crimes.

  141. mahsa rezaee says

    Science has developed a great deal over recent years. For this reason, an increase in the expectation of life of people to about 100 years or more will not be impossible in the near future. From my point of view, this can have both drawbacks and benefits.

  142. Owing to many reasons crime rate among teenagers and adults has been increasing dramatically.

  143. To gain knowledge on any field has become relatively easier with the advancement and easy accessibility of internet. However, it is still believed by many that nothing beats the learning environment of the classroom.

  144. Owing to the advancements in technology, some people opt to study online whereas others believe learning in a classroom is worthwhile.

    • 1 Although some people prefer online tutoring, others opined for traditional classroom as more effective.

      2 Although majority of the people are trying to find a balance between their work and other aspects of life, few are actually able to achieve.

      3 Crime has been considerably increasing in the age group of adolescents and teens.

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