Below are ideas for the topic of history in IELTS writing task 2. This essay is about how important history is to learn. This can relate to the subject of history as a whole or children spending time learning history. You should use the ideas given below and adapt them to the specific essay question given by IELTS.
Sample IELTS Essay Question
Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think that it is essential to learn. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
IELTS Essay Ideas
Below are ideas for both side of the argument. A useful definition of history is “it is the study of past events, particularly human affairs.”. It might be the study of a country or of a person in the past. It might involve a particular event or a general situation at a given time in the past.
History is a Waste of Time
- Most people memorise dates, names and facts when they study history. This information is not useful in everyday life or for the future.
- If we could actually learn from history, history wouldn’t be full of the same repeated mistakes. However, the same mistakes are made again and again which makes history irrelevant to learn for the future.
- History is a subject that is rarely used in people’s lives so it would be better to focus on science or technology which is more relevant to the future and today’s society.
- Each historical event has different perspectives. For this reason, it makes learning history a waste of time because events can also be interpreted in a different way which makes what we learn in history less valuable.
- Many school curriculum have been set and are rarely changed. That curriculum includes little current history which is the only type of history that helps people understand the world they currently live in.
History is Important
- History helps young people understand their own culture and how their culture and country have evolved.
- History gives identity and helps unify people. It gives people a sense of roots and belonging.
- History teaches people what their forefathers experienced and suffered in the past in order to make their country what it is today.
- History teaches us about travesties which have occurred in the past, such as the Holocaust. It is essential for both people in the past, present and future to never forget such events in order to honour the memory of those lost and to ensure it never happens again.
- History helps us understand change. It records and helps people understand successes and failures. Through these studies people can learn about change and how others are affected by it.
- It shows patterns of behaviour or events in the past and their outcome which can help us avoid similar outcomes in the future.
- Learn about the past often gives a glimpse of the future. It shows a path of development that will continue past the present and into the future.
- Valuable information can often be found in history, such as traditional medicines. Learning about past lifestyles and techniques used by people in the past can hold the secrets to remedies or cures no longer used.
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This is my try. It took me 45 minutes instead of 40 but it’s my 3rd essay and still practice on time management. Also, it is quite extensive at 374 words. Sadly I couldn’t find ways to cut it after finishing it. Also I believe my conclusion is off.
It is commonly thought by some that learning history is time wasted, whereas others believe that it is important to study it. In my opinion, I think that history is essential for people as it explains the world around us, if it is studied effectively.
On the one hand, many people believe that studying history is not worth it today as it is irrelevant to modern careers, such as engineering, computers and science. They argue that the subject of history could be replaced by newer subjects more relevant to today’s needs, namely, coding and modeling, which can be more useful for employees and businesses. Furthermore, the subject of history has not changed over the last decade, still focusing on memorizing dates, events, names and facts that most people will not actually remember after a while. They emphasize the fact that history is taught only to be learned by heart, instead of understanding its meaning and applying it in the present and future. For this reason, I believe that the study of history should adopt a new modern approach to meet the needs of the technologically driven society.
On the other hand, there are several people who think that history plays an important role in grasping the way people and societies behave. History teaches their readers valuable lessons about past mistakes, such as wars and political decisions, and the consequences of the actions that led to them. Because of that, people understand current situations about the state of the world and the reasons behind political and economic decisions, while also learning to analyze sources and understand the causes and effects of these decisions. Furthermore, history teaches us about heritage and culture, and the experiences, failures and successes of past generations. Thus, people grow a sense of roots and belonging, while also comprehending and respecting other cultures, resulting in friendlier and more peaceful encounters. For this reason, I think that history is essential both for the present and future of humanity.
In conclusion, while some people argue that history and the way it is taught is outdated, others believe that it has an important role in the understanding of current situations. I agree with the latter view, as history provides insights into today’s societal development.
Although my website does not offer a feedback service, I do have time to comment on your essay, which I enjoyed reading. You have the potential to do very well indeed.
You are worried about the word count. Certainly, it is long. It’s over 300 words, which isn’t advisable. But I will say that each sentence is relevant and ideas are well developed so in this case, you wouldn’t be marked down for it. Also, your English language is excellent so you aren’t opening yourself up to more language errors by writing at this length. However, as it took you 45 mins, that is an issue. Writing task 1 is still worth about 33% of your marks and can make the difference between a good band score and a below average one – you do need a full 20 mins for task 1. So, below I’ve re-written your essay using your ideas with the length of only 293 words. You’ll be able to compare sentence by sentence to see what I have and haven’t altered. Also, pay attention to the linking words because I’ve altered a couple of them. And I do apologise for typos – I’m the world’s worst typist.
Essay:
It is commonly thought by some that learning history is time wasted, whereas others believe that it is important to study. In my opinion, I think that history is essential for people as it explains the world around us, if it is taught and studied effectively.
On the one hand, many people believe that studying history is not valuable in today’s world and is certainly irrelevant to modern careers, such as engineering, computers and science. Another reason this is an irrelevant subject is that it has not changed over the last decade, still focusing on memorizing dates, events, names and facts for events most people will not actually remember that happened centuries before. This is emphasized by the fact that history is mainly taught by rote learning which does little to help students interpret the lessons of the past, thus making history a waste of time to learn.
On the other hand, some people think history still has a role to play and I agree. It teaches valuable lessons about past mistakes, such as wars and political decisions, and the consequences of the actions that led to them. Due to that, people can grasp current situations about the state of the world now and the dynamics behind a country’s decisions, while also learning the skills to analyse sources of information and see possible causes and effects of current events. Moreover, people can learn about their culture and heritage giving them a sense of roots and belonging, resulting in friendlier and more peaceful encounters.
In conclusion, while people may have varying opinions about the relevancy of history as a subject to be taught, I believe that it provides insights into today’s societal development and can help us gain a sense of who we are.
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Just to note – one reason essays get so long is that people don’t plan properly. For each main idea, you will have just two or three supporting sentences which you should plan carefully before you start writing. This way, your sentences won’t get too long and your body paragraph will remain at a reasonable length. If you start writing without your supporting sentences planned carefully (planned and analysed for length), you will ramble and your essay will grow and grow out of control – which of course wastes valuable time. I hope you find this useful 🙂
I can’t thank you enough.
I studied your interpretation of my essay thoroughly, and although it’s much shorter, it still conveys 99% of the message I intended. I can definitely see how you improved it to a band 8-9. Thank you for reassuring me that my essay was good.
Also, you are completely spot on as all 3 essays I wrote are kind of big, at 290-370 words. I still have time to improve them as my exams are in 55 days. I guess It’s the way I think. Everything I wrote was just coming naturally to me while I was writing (after reading your ideas), meaning that yes my planning is quite poor. This is the case for task 1 too where I spent between 16 and 22 minutes, writing from 180 to 230 words. That’s basically the only thing I am trying to improve upon for now, making them more concise.
As a thank you, your next 2 coffees are on me.
Sounds like you’ve got a clear plan of action now. And also don’t forget to review ideas for lots of topics as well for writing task 2. Good luck!
Thank you for providing these valuable tips, Liz! I particularly like the first and last points about the importance of learning history, but may I say we should better not put in the “school context” because it is not mentioned in the question? As far as I’m concerned, even a working-age adult or retiree can learn history, simply out of curiosity.
When it comes to history as a subject, the majority of people studying it are children in school. Certainly, adults can study it at higher education level and other adults can study it simply for enjoyment and interest. As you said, the essay question didn’t specifically mention children learning it as a subject, but we can’t ignore that aspect. Almost every single child will have studied history at school, those numbers cannot compare to adults studying history. So, to tackle this essay question in depth, it is important to mention children and history as a school subject.
Got it, thank you for the reply!
Some believe that learning history is a waste of time, whereas others consider it crucial. Although both perspectives are valid, I think that studying history is significant to some extent: understanding one’s own culture and learning traditional treatment approaches.
It is noteable that most people memorise dates, names, and facts when they study history. This information is not useful in everyday life or for the future. Furthermore, authorities and lecturers maintain to recommend that learning history is crucial in order to make a decision for now and the future, even though no government’s decisions are unaffected by history. For example, today World War I is often presented merely as a story, although many people have extensive knowledge about that.
On the other hand, history encompasses culture, literature, and music in spite of the fact that they are ignored in school curricula. In this way, it helps young people understand their own culture and how their culture and country have evolved. For instance, consider wedding ceremonies, they may vary from country to country as well as they have evolved throughout history within a culture.
Another key point is that medicine can be better understood through its history. Learning about past lifestyles and techniques used by people in the past can hold the secrets to remedies or cures no longer used. Recently, several historical medical approaches and medicines have been evaluated by physicians. For example, musical therapy, used by Avicenna many years ago, is still employed for patients with mental disorders.
In conclusion, while some consider studying history a waste of time, I have shown that there are advantages to learning history, such as understanding one’s own traditions and historical medical techniques.
Thank you for providing this fantastic piece of knowledge. This one is very useful.
You’re welcome 🙂
some people believes that history is such a waste of time and boring but others argue that it is an important subject . In my opine,from the study of history there are a lot of beneficial factors that helps in better understanding of the past events.
There is a common opinion among people that learning history is important while some do not consider it as useful. Learning history is always useful in knowing about your culture and how the people have evolved with time. However history in the world of technology and innovations doesn’t have much impact nowadays.
History is considered as the important part of any nation or country because it reflects the culture and traditions of a particular society. There are important events in the past that how people have evolved and changed their way of living. Also it mentions the important dates and people who had done something innovative/big in the past. History helps to modify our culture and things which needs to be amended. It also taches the history of noble families. It guides about the pattern of diseases that run-in families so we can take precautionary measures regarding them. It facilitates to create medicines/treatment for non-cured diseases of past.
However, history is not useful nowadays because future of the world doesn’t depend on it. Today world is about new technologies and modern techniques which make it easier for people to learn. Remembering dates and events is not an easy task because every historical event has different perspective. Having past methods in present world doesn’t create much difference because people and their culture has evolved with the passage of time.
In my opinion, studying history is important because that make us to understands about our culture and learn about change with time. It also reflects the important historical event that took place in the past. Upcoming generations will learn about their past and the change that has taken place to amend their present and future.
thanks so much for those introduction about writing task 2 especially.after, looking at your notes I could write en essay by my self , thanks so much .
Some people believe that history is such a boring subject and time consuming at school but other argue that it is an important part of subject to learning about many history events in past. In my opinion, Undoubtedly, from studying history can take a lot of beneficial views or criticises, and then helping children better understand about their life before making any mistakes. There should be a balance of time between studying history and other practical subject at school curriculum.
Firstly, one of the popular reasons why history is a great deal at school program is that studying history can help students to make a sure about mistakes at their present-days problems. It means that students become more aware of any mistakes in the future. Take medical operation as example, many medical students either at school or university would like studying and learning about studying history medicine that relate to mistakes or any misunderstanding.at the result that make then to be more open-eyes.
On the other hand, if teachers are more care about studying history, It would be more time consuming so it is better, there is a suitable time-balances between learning history forms and other subjects. For example, some students do not enjoy studying history events. because at the moment teenager are more interested in modern time rather than the studying in the past.
In conclusion, although it is common believe that studying history has a critical point to make new generation to be more awareness in the life ,it does make a sense of subject at school with spending a lot of time on it .
Hello lizy please can you help me out with this question”Discuss the crisis of historical relevance in our present day society is partly a product of social ignorance and largely the consequences of conservative and reactionary approach to the study of history by historians…”please help me out
That isn’t an IELTS essay question. Where did you find it? I suggest you are very careful about essay questions you find online. Stick to preparing essays using realistic or authentic questions.
Hi Liz,
I am taking the paper-based IELTS exam next week, so I wonder if it is important that I write clean. My handwriting is not bad, but sometimes I need to make alterations that would require erasing words and sentences, then fitting the new phrase (which is usually longer than the previous one) in the same space. All these make my writing paper a bit messy. Would that be a problem?
Thanks.
It’s only a problem if the examiner struggles to read it. Are you making alterations because you have new ideas and want to express them or because of language problems? Always plan your essay thoroughly before you start. Each sentence will be planned for ideas and content. When you start writing, all you need to do is focus on your grammar and vocab for each sentence. Errors ought to be minimal. Also consider doing the computer based test if possible because then you can delete and move chunks of writing around on the page.
Hi Liz,
Again, I’d thank you for the valuable lessons and I’m going through them one by one so I can get corrected my mistakes.
What I want to know is, there are 5 points under why history is considered as a time waste and 8 points under why history is important. Can you please mention how much points are normally enough to write under each of the cases when I get this type of an opinion essay.
Thanks!
The above isn’t an essay. It’s just a list of ideas. Normally you would have two or three body paragraphs in any essay.
I would deeply appreciate your Great effort towards valuable lessons 💪 I had got exactly the same above question in a computer based IELTS today. Thank you again 😍
That was lucky. Good luck with your results 🙂
Hi I am a 13 year old and thanks for the help
Liz
Glad to meet you, Tujan. Take your time using all the pages and lessons on my site. Good luck 🙂
Hi Liz, for this particular topic, is it acceptable to state that I regard both are equally important subjects? Or, must I give a one-sided opinion? Thanks.
Kate.
I took the computer-based exam yesterday and this was exactly my task 2.
That’s lucky! I hope you did well 🙂
Hi Liz
I am your avid student and I am stuck at 6.5 in writing despite scoring band 9 in other modules.
Can you please review my essay and give feedback? I have tried to pay heed to your advice.
The question of whether to prioritize history over science subjects in teaching curriculum is an old one. There are valid arguments on both sides but in my opinion, more stress should be placed on teaching science and technology to the students as compared to traditional subjects like history, as it is more beneficial to the society as well as more fun and interesting for students.
The proponents of teaching history argue that children should be familiarized with their ancestors and the ordeals that they went through to teach them important life lessons.For instance the study of Holocaust can help children in understanding the devastating consequences of human actions on the society. History also gives people a sense of identity and helps in unifying people. For example the recent addition of the subject of Egyptology was hailed as a positive development by most Egyptians and was the source of great national pride for them.
On the other hand,some people point out and I agree that science and technology should be the major focus in school curriculum as it will help students in benefiting the society. The advancements in these fields can help in betterment of present as well as future of the nations. For example the recent developments in the field of robotic surgery have revolutionized healthcare for terminal patients. Moreover science subjects are more interesting for students as there is less memorization and more practical work. According to a study published in world education journal, visual learning in science labs is 70% more effective than the traditional lectures in subjects like history.
In conclusion, more stress should be placed on teaching the practical science fields as compared to history as it will be more beneficial to humanity in addition to being more palatable for students.
This is a Discussion Essay. You have written it very well indeed. Did you get a Discussion Essay in your previous IELTS test?
Thank you, you encouragement means a lot to me.
Last time I got a personal viewpoint essay topic….
With Opinion Essays it is easy to not fulfil the Task Response which can greatly affect your score. It might be worth getting my Opinion Essay Advanced Lesson to see if you are following the right techniques: https://elizabethferguson.podia.com/. You also have to consider task 1. If you are taking the Academic test, there are again criteria that are easily overlooked. See this page: https://ieltsliz.com/ielts-writing-task-1-lessons-and-tips/. Your English does contain errors which might affect hitting band 9. But with the right techniques, you should be able to hit 8 or more (depending on how your write on the day). Always aim for accuracy. The main difference between 8 and 9 is the degree of accuracy in your English writing – so never aim to impress.
Hi Liz,
Thank you so much for your marvellous help. I am your big fan. I am going for exam 2nd time. I hope I will get sufficient score this time and for that I required your blessings.
Thanks a lot.
Amee.
Good luck!
Hi Liz,
Thanks a lot.
Hope you are doing well, I would to ask if do you know what are the topics given for the month of November. I will be taking the exam by December 15th and 16th, so I would like to have initial ideas to start things right. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
For speaking, topics and questions are used for about three months. But for writing, this isn’t necessarily true. The only way to prepare is to prepare all common topics: https://ieltsliz.com/100-ielts-essay-questions/ and recent topics: https://ieltsliz.com/recent-ielts-questions-and-topics/.
Dear Liz,
I am wondering if it is a typo in the sentence ” history gives identify ” or it should be ” identity”
Thank you very much for all your valuable effort .
Thanks – I’ve altered it.
No.
Thank You Liz . Thank You. 🌱
Hello Liz,
I know you will not put the band score, but please can you tell me is this essay enough to get a band score 7.
Traditional subjects such as History, Politics etc were taught in schools spending more time rather than spending on teaching interpersonal and soft skills which is of greater use for students to find a good employment opportunities in future. In my opinion, although spending a good time on teaching traditional subjects, but also giving an equal or more importance to the skills could be a key solution to find a good job.
Firstly, History as a traditional subjects , in addition schools are the best way that our child to get to know about the past tradition, culture, ancient methods, languages as well as about our ancestors, for this reasons, traditional subjects should give more importance like any other subjects in schools.Knowing more about our culture, tradition, history is the only way that we can uphold about our beliefs.
However, due to the increased demand for the skills namely interpersonal and soft skills such as mathematical, marketing etc which is required in all enterprises or in a job market, I admit that by contrast, it is primary to teach the students about the skills in school in addition to the subject history or arts. One clear example, to illustrate here is when we are going for an interview the employer mainly look over the skills that the employee have rather than his knowledge about the traditional subjects because obviously, the employer ‘s motive is the growth of the company.
To summarize, I firmly believe that in school the teachers should give equal or either more importance to teach their students about the skills as it is the most important factor to find a good job. Even though it is good to have knowledge about the tradition and culture.
Is it good enough to get a score of 7? Please if you have time point out my mistakes.
Sorry I don’t give feedback or scores. But I will say, avoid using “etc”. Just decide on two examples and that’s enough.
Hi Miss Liz! I have a question. Why should you not use “etc” in IELTS Writing? Thank you!
You want to showcase your English, so choose your examples carefully and no need to add “etc”. The letters “etc” means unknown, unstated examples – don’t do that in a language test.
Hi miss liz can you please give some variations of task one.
Go to the HOME page and access the main writing task 1 section of the website to find model answers for task 1.
hi mam,
I am jumbled up, if the question is what extend you agree or disagree?, and am agreeing that what should my paragragraphs constitute?
your earliest reply will be highly appreciated.
If you agree, then each paragraph gives one reason for your opinion.
Hi Liz, how are you?
I am Dario from Argentina and I will take the exam next Saturday. First of all I would like to thank you for all the material, tips and exercises of the web.
Secondly, if possible, I would like to to have a look on my essay and tell me what you think.
Thanks in advance
So many times one can hear that the study of history is pointless. Luckily, they are not the majority and other people still believe that history is one of the essential knowledges.
Narrow-minded people may think that the past is gone and what we are living now or going to live in the future has no link with it. They focus on the future as it comes from another planet or suddenly appears from underneath a rock. They do not really see that what happens today is because something happened yesterday, which change the course of the things, made people to take other decisions and choose different things than the ones it would have chosen under other circumstances.
Alternatively, still the most of people support and study history. History is sometimes crucial to understand what is going to happen, but also to prevent some things to happen again, as the holocaust or wars. The same way everyone as individual makes mistakes, the society as a whole do it as well. History provides us the key to think and understand when, why, how and what happen anything and act consequently next time. It is also our collective memory, therefore historians have an important role in our society.
In conclusion, although a small group of people try to reduce the importance of history it can be easily argued and demonstrated that is groundless.
In my opinion, history is one of the most important (and exciting) topics in human sciences.
Really that’s true and you helped me a lot through these points
Pliz help me madam,i have an assignment of history now i want u to help me on the same topic.why history as a subject should be taught in schools? Pliz i need some points
All the ideas are given on this page.
mam u need to give people ideas and help instead of just telling them that all the ideas are on the page
The entire page above is a list of ideas for a topic. Please read them.
Hi
Thankyou madam ..for everything..
thank you too
To study history is like to live in past.Situations and circumstances changes from time to time.What was considered right in the past may be perceived as wrong in the present circumstances.In the past nations were ruled by the king with absolute authority at their command and can be seen described as dictator. Dictator in present age are not considered acceptable,so why to study previous kings.
hello mam . provide me with the ideas in the recent topic of ielts “similarities are rising with same types of shops , products and brands all over the world . what are the merits and demerits of this ” this was the essay of ielts writing task 2 held on 26 th september 2015
Please see the recent questions page where some ideas have been shared.
Liz
Hi Mam
I’m blessed that I found your blog at last. I’ve already got Band score 6, but my goal is 8. I’m excited to have your advanced lessons, but unfortunately I’m not sure how I can pay for that from Bangladesh.
Could you please have a look on my Introduction and advise me, pointing the mistakes I made, what I should do?
Thanks in advance
Learning history is interesting and enjoyable. Studying history is prioritized by some as an effective subject although others argue against it as a waste of time. While studying history, it is possible to know about ancestors’ contribution on this modern world and the mistakes they made, although memorizing dates and names, and lack of science or technology has no usefulness in future.
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Hi Liz, in writing, is it okay ti use contractions? Because in speaking, it contractions are preferred. And is it safe to use highfalutin vocabulary such as sojourn and etc for writing task 2?
No, never use contractions in IELTS writing. Only use vocabulary that you can use with complete accuracy.
Liz
Hi Liz,
If I don’t get wrong, there is a typo in the third idea in the viewpoint “History is important”. History teaches “us” instead of “use”.
You should think about charging for your proof reading services 🙂 Well spotted.
Liz
Hi Liz, I want to write a balanced essay. Would this introduction will be fine?
People have different views about whether or not learning history is vital in our daily lives. In my opinion, studying history has a signicant importance not only in the present but also in the future generation of our society.
Thanks.
Please read my notice: https://ieltsliz.com/posting-writing/
Thanks
Liz
I think that if you can not look back at history how can you make today’s age any better
June 13 writing task 2: the statement given went something like this – a huge number of accommodation and transportation facilities emerge in big cities nowadays thus the government is asking the business sectors to relocate their businesses in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Thanks for sharing.
Liz