IELTS GT Letter 2017 with Model Answer

The IELTS General Training letter below was reported in the IELTS test this year. It is a typical formal letter that can appear in IELTS GT writing task 1.
IELTS General Training writing task 1 is a letter which you must write in 20 mins with over 150 words. You can find useful tips on this page: Essential Tips for IELTS GT Letter Writing. For more useful links, see below.

IELTS General Training Letter 2017

You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
  • What is the article about?
  • What is the error?
  • What you expect an editor to do?

IELTS GT Letter Model Answer

Dear Sir,
I am writing to you regarding the recent article you published about Sir David Markham last week, April 2nd , in The Times newspaper.
The article gives a breif biography of Sir David’s life and then continues to focus on his work and the impact it has had. The biography starts with his birth in Edinburgh and his later move in 1962 to Durham University. From there, it focuses on his work with the UN.
I would like to point out an error in your article. Documentation shows that Sir David did not go directly from Edinburgh to the University of Durham, in 1961. In fact he took a gap year in Europe working with a volunteer program and then went to University in 1962.  I know this as I worked with him in Europe and became friends with him. His year abroad, which is absent from your article, created the foundation of his philosophy of life which guided him through his work in later years.
I hope you will publish this correction in the newspaper. Sir David’s work is still of immense importance and people should know the importance of that gap year in his life.
Looking forward to a positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
Jane Frankland
Comments: Band score 8. The task has been completed but there are a couple of issues which prevent it getting a higher score. 
1) Second Paragraph: breif = brief
2) Your sincerely = Your faithfully
3) Signing off the name without a title

IELTS General Training Useful Links:

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IELTS GT Model Letter: Complaint Model Letter
IELTS GT Model Letter: Invitation Model Letter
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Comments

  1. OLUKITIBI TOSIN says:

    Hi Liz,

    Thanks so much for your online videos,they helped during my preparation. My writing band moved up to band 7 after following your recommendations.

    God bless you.

    Best Online IELTS teacher,no doubt

    • i’m so impressed! Well done! It’s not easy to boost your writing score to 7. You should be proud of that!! And thank you for saying my online materials helped you. Thank you for supporting me 🙂

  2. Hi Liz,

    I am bit perplexed with one of the sentences used in the second paragraph of the letter. Is it right to use become friends instead of became friends?

  3. Hello Liz, you mentioned that task 2 for academic has 2 options, 4 or 5 paragraph in total. Does this mean I can write two supporting ideas after introduction ( like firstly, secondly and then conclusion) if I want 4 paragraph ? And does it also the same for task 2 general ? I am asking this because when I learned academic writing, i was taught I need 3 supporting ideas between introduction and conclusion.

  4. Hi Liz,
    Thanks you very much for such brilliant sample test with answer.
    When you repeated University, why you wrote it with capital (U) and without an article (THE) as you were talking about a definite university? As far I was thinking, it should be (and then went to the university).

    Please elaborate,

    Yours sincerely,
    Ahmad,

  5. I really appreciate your teaching style and the tips you mentioned ,however i have a comment on your webpages that it is not interactive that mean too many links .

    • Each link is a free page of tips. Surely that’s good? All links are accessed through the main pages: http://ieltsliz.com/ielts-writing-task-2/. Sure it’s great for students to see a page with such a long list of links providing free lessons. Let me know what you think – I’m interested to know because I’m planning to redesign my website.

  6. Hello Liz,
    I want to ask is there penalty for someone who write above 150 words? If the wordings is above 150 words can this earn the candidate additional marks.

    • You MUST write over 150 words. These are the rules. If you write under the word count, you will be penalised.

  7. Deepika Gupta says:

    Liz, I feel this answer is not in line with the task. The question says you must know the person. How can one write about some famous person? Thanks

  8. Amit Sinha says:

    Hi Liz,

    I am grateful to you for indeed an amazing job that you are doing of imparting your precious knowledge .
    I have to take ielts general exam on 13th may and i am struggling with writing.Recently i saw I recently saw a discussion essay question and tried to answer it.Would you help me understanding my errors.Here it goes.

    question : “Prevention is better than cure”.Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.

    answer. It is often argued that money should be spent wisely in preventive measures rather spending in treatment of diseases.In my opinion,i believe that it is always better to spend in prevention of diseases.This essay will discuss that how a precise planning with the help of insurance policies ,and regular health check up support this view.

    Firstly,an effective planning of dealing with health issues should be the first priority.This is because it will allow us to refrain from spending enormous amount of money at the time of treatment of disease.Also,with th growing competition between companies offering policies,it is now easy to afford their interest rate.For instance,Bajaj health insurance policy offers a plan of 4 lackhs with a monthly interst of Rs 1000 which is quite affordable.Thus it is agreed that it is sagacious way of saving money for unpredictable situation.

    Secondly,a regular health checkup ensures that we are spending our income on right place.Consultation with a doctor makes us aware of possible health issues and ways of dealing with it.Although it requires us to spend money on regular basis,but it is always appreciated as it saves us from potential damages.

    In conclusion,it is agreed that spending on prevention is way better than putting our expenditure in treatment of ailments which requires us to spend major part of our saving.Individuals should decide wisely about right investment when it comes to health issues.

  9. Dear Liz

    Thank you for the wonderful lessons you give . You are a true blessing to me and to many I believe.
    I have my test on 29th of April and I am aiming for a bandscore 8. I want to make sure I score well in writing .
    Would you please tell me if I understand the below points right .
    1. Dear Sir/Madam—Yours faithfully
    2. Dear Mr. John—-Yours sincerely
    3. Dear Jamie ( an informal letter to a friend)
    Can I use just

    “Love
    Ashish”

    Ashish is my name . Or should I use” Yours lovingly ” and then name?

    Can you please send me the link of few sample greetings and closing to score high.

    Thank you so much for all the help. 😊

  10. Hong Nghia says:

    Dear teacher ! in Vietnam, until now nobody even Ietls training schools mention about this- change to write a letter. So how i can adopt with this, i have only 1 months left to take the exam.

  11. Hello Liz,

    I am so happy to see that you shared GT writing exercises too.

  12. can we use template for the task 2 for academic

  13. ganesh pawar says:

    great article mam..
    keep us guiding, as im preparing for IELTS general
    thanks.

  14. Thank you so much like 4 this post

  15. Simon Bullock says:

    Hi Liz
    I love your site and strongly encourage all my students to use it.
    Just a small point regarding your model General writing Task 1.
    ‘Dear Sir… yours sincerely’
    Have things changed? I was always taught that with ‘Sir/Madam’ we use ‘yours faithfully’.

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