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IELTS Discussion Essay Model Answer

This IELTS discussion essay sample answer is estimated at band 9. See comments below the essay for advice and tips.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job, while there are others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that having university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.

On the one hand, many think it is easier for most people to find a good job if they are university graduates with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education puts people one step ahead of others who do not and this can be the deciding factor in getting a good job. The competition to get in to universities and the increasing number of graduates show just how significant this level of education is for people’s future work opportunities.

On the other hand, having work experience and soft skills, such as leadership skills and other interpersonal skills, can also throw the balance in favour of the applicant, according to some. For many positions there are an overwhelming number of applicants and, therefore, it is often thought that having relevant experience in that line of work or having acquired useful soft skills that can be valuable to a company, can put one ahead of the game when applying for a position.

Finally, in my opinion, whether needing high level education or skills and experience, depends on the position being applied for. Take for example law, medicine or teaching, it is impossible to be considered for a position without the required educational background. In contrast, in business, it would be more important for a candidate to have soft skills and experience in that line of business so they can step into a position without further training and be of immediate benefit to the company.

In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background either in experience or education depending on the type of work and field. People should make sure they attain the necessary skills or degrees before applying for a job in order to be sure of success.

Comments: This is a a band score 9  essay. It has over 300 words but all sentences are relevant, focused and well written. Band score 8.5 and 9 students can attempt long essays successfully but students from band 8 to band 6, should aim for around 270 to 290 words. Both sides are clearly discussed and the opinion is also clearly given. Linking devices are well used.


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  1. http://Wiebke says

    Hi Liz,

    I’m struggling to reach a higher bandscore than 6.0 in writing. Therefore I bought your advanced writing lessons to spot some of my possible mistakes. Beside the fact that I have problems to structure my thoughts quickly, I’m sometimes confused by the question itself. After watching your lessons, I have tried to answer some essay questions and I came across with some I don’t know how I should organise them.

    Firstly, for example, the discussion essay about the death penalty on your website. This question only mentions that I have to discuss both side. So, I’m not sure if I have to write a balanced view or can I also write a one-sided view? Moreover, I think I should not give my opinion, however, a one-sided view seems to reflect my personal point of view. How would you organise your essay?

    Secondly, I’m really confused with the question “Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?” You said, it doesen’t matter whether there is a “do you think” include or not, because I have to make a choice which side outweigh the other…admittedly there are many official Model answer from IELTS books, which don’t give an opinion in terms of this question. Are there any differents I didn’t recognise?

    I would be really grateful if you could help me.

    Kind regards,

    • http://Liz says

      In my Advanced lesson for the Discussion Essay there is a model essay for a Discussion without an opinion. Please take a look at it. Any question that is asking you to choose options will require an opinion – there are many ways to voice an opinion.

  2. http://Chowdhury%20rafath%20kaniz says

    Hi liz
    In the introduction can I write “in this essay I will deliberately discuss the both views and formulate my opinion at the end of the essay ” instead answering directly in the introduction

    • http://Liz says

      Do not memorise sentences or phrases. You can learn words and linking devices. All sentences and phrases should be created by yourself. See my model essays.

  3. http://monika%20urbaniak says

    Hi Liz,
    Recently, I have been using a correction service to check my essays. The last one I completed was a discussion essay. Although my estimated band score was 8.0, which I am pleased about, I am really puzzled about one of the words they highlighted as a mistake. I am talking about the determiner ‘the’ in the phrase ‘on the one hand’. I have used this specific phrase a number of times and I don’t really understand why they think the article was used incorrectly. In fact, they made it clear that the phrase should be ‘on one hand’. The correction service is from the USA. Could this be the matter- American/British English? I know that the correct use of articles is one of my struggles, as I am originally from Poland. But I am trying really hard to grasp and study this concept. I would really appreciate your explanation, as there is no further comment on the feedback I received from the correction service.

  4. http://sreekutty says

    Hi liz, About problem solution essay- is it ok to write 4 problems with 3 paragraphs ( 2 problems in one paragraph, other 2 are separately)

    • That would be illogical. And why would you want to do that. You don’t get a higher score because you have more ideas. You get a higher score for extending ideas with supporting points and organising them logically.

  5. http://Toghrul says

    Hi Liz, thank you a lot for your useful advice and if it is possible, please give feedback, this is my first essay.

    Instruction is simply to discuss not to give opinion.

    In last decades, with the impact of growing globalization, it is noticed significant positive affects in the economy of the world, whereas this globe challenges brings some negative aspects with itself. Regarding the advantages of the globalization, a number of leading companies of the world gain more profits, while some affected countries are forced to lose their cultural values.

    On the one hand, there is a competition between huge international companies over the world. They compete to produce products in better quality and lower prices. As a result, this overseas rivalry helps to boost world economy, at the same time, people all over the world take advantages in connection with buying more qualitative and less expenses products. For instance, it is obviously seems that the products which are manufactured by Samsung, Apple, Huawei and some other main companies have wide functions and simultaneously they are sold in lower prices.

    On the other hand, there are some affected countries that people who live in these countries are obliged to get used to customs and traditions of the hegemon countries. In this manner, impacted society uses international languages, listens to singers who are famous all over the world and eats meals which are popular overseas and so on. To illustrate, McDonalds, KFC, Mado serve to people in more than half of the world countries, Justin Timberlake, Beyoncé, Rihanna are listened by at least one of three people and English, German, Russian languages have been more important than their native languages.

    In conclusion, the monosemous acceptance of globalization is not proper approach. When this term is talked over, both sides should be taken into account.

  6. http://Asad says

    Mam, why your advanced writing task 2 lessons have only 1) opinion, 2) discussion and 3) adv/disadvantages type essays lessons? What about a) problems/solutions, b) two-part (direct question) and c) positive/negative development type essays? Kindly reply, because I want to learn structure of each type of IELTS (GT) essay. Thank you.

    • Because I became too sick to make more videos.

      • http://Asad says

        First of all, thank you for your prompt reply, Hope you are doing well now. I will pray for your health and speedy recovery. Can I expect video lessons on those missing type essays in near future? Or do you think it is sufficient enough to just go through your sample essays on those type of essays to get an idea of written structure?

        • The three Advanced lessons available teach you enough skills to be able to apply the same logical. However, you will need to review model essays and other tips. Did you see my free writing task 2 lessons? See this page: http://ieltsliz.com/ielts-writing-task-2/. Yesterday I put up a lesson about a mixed task essay with tips: http://ieltsliz.com/model-essay-for-tv-weight-problems/. Just take a look around my site. It is unlikely I will make a new video soon. I’m still too sick for videos. But I post regular lessons on my site and am working on e-books “Ideas for IELTS Essays” and “Grammar for Writing Task 2”.

          • http://Asad says

            Yes, I already read the tips mentioned in the first link and just went through the second link now, both were so helpful. You are an indeed a blessing for students who are struggling with their IELTS score. Thank you for your help and tips. I am desperately waiting for your e-books. Best wishes and prayers for your health.

            • http://Liz says

              Thanks. I do plan to get back to making videos, but not until my health is completely recovered which might take a long time. As soon as I can, I’ll be making Advanced lessons for every single part of the IELTS test.

              • http://Asad says

                Hopefully you’ll be able to make more videos for your students very soon. Lot of respect and prayers for you mam.
                One of your students from other part of the world 🙂

  7. http://Jana%20Brits says

    Pleaaaase shed some light on the following: in the introduction of Task 2, what is the best waybto phrase that the X will be discussed in the essay. Do you say ‘This essay will discuss/This essay disagrees” or do you make use of pronouns such as ‘I’ “I agree that/ I will discuss X” . So confused as someone (online tutors) would say one thing, someone something different again. So now I don’t know which would be acceptable by an IELTS examiner.

    • http://Liz says

      You don’t need to use it at all. It is not required for IELTS. As you see, none of my model essays use that kind of sentence.

  8. Hello mam, how are you.Can you tell me in academic writing task 1 and 2 ,it is necessary to use passive voice or not.

    • The examiner does NOT have a checklist of tenses or other grammar features that you have to use. IELTS grammar is not marked in that way.

      • http://Amal says

        then what do you recommend? and how do
        they examine grammar?

        • http://Liz says

          Grammar is marked by using a range of tenses that are suitable and appropriate to the essay and the subject. You can’t push a future prefect into your essay because you think it will give you a higher score. All tenses must be used correctly. The examiner will also pay attention to sentence structures, so you need to pay attention to not being too repetitive. Furthermore, the examiner will look at the density of grammar errors, for example band 5 = frequent errors, band 6 = some errors, band 7 = few errors. So, you can see your aim is to produce a range of suitable grammar and also reduce the errors you make. At all times, you only use the grammar you are familiar with to reduce errors. I am currently putting together a grammar e-book which will explain all this in great detail.

  9. Hi Liz

    I am confused about the introduction of task 2. Because I have learnt from all the ielts centers in my country (India) that we should not paraphrase the statement in introduction. They told that in 2016 the Cambridge changed the pattern due to some reasons. Paraphrasing was relevant before it. But after that they changed it and is not useful and thus reduce our scores. Please tell me……. 🙏🙏

    • http://Liz says

      IELTS have not changed the rules at all. Paraphrasing is as much part of vocabulary as ever. Introducing the issues you are writing about is essential which is done through introducing the essay question in your own words.

  10. http://Kevin%20Lee says

    Thank you liz.
    I have a question: When we write a discussion essay, we generally give the advantage/benefit of both ideas but don’t talk about the drawbacks. Why? Is it just because we don’t have enough time and don’t need to because talking about the benefits of both will meet the length?
    Also, if i write a 4 paragraph discussion essay and the second paragraph of course is the point that i agree with, can i talk about the drawbacks of the opinion that i don’t agree in the third paragraph? If so, how long the disagree part do you suggest?

    • It is because this isn’t an adv/disadv essay. It is an essay where you explain why some people believe X and why other people believe Y.

  11. http://berfin says

    hey Liz,
    I watched your discussion essay video and i am perplexed about sth.
    If i have one sided opinion, can i show my opinion in body parapgraph 2? because according to question, i agree the second part statement and i want to follow the sequence.

    Thank you very much

  12. http://Sahil says

    Hello Liz, does the prepositions and articles such as ‘a, an, the, in, on’ e.t.c are counted as the part of total writing words in IELTS writing tasks ?

  13. http://Ata%20Snow%20🏂 says

    Hello Liz, I am really confused, some web sources tell that in discussion essay, the opinion of the candidate should be given in INTRODUCTION, whereas, others suggest to not include your view in introduction paragraph, just discuss both sides in two body parts and give your opinion ONLY in CONCLUSION. Please, dispel clouds… 🙏😵

    • I can’t control what is written on the internet. I can’t control other teachers. You will always find conflicting views. But I have made it very clear – the opinion is as equal as the discussion. It is not your jobs to decide one part of the instructions are less important than the other – they are equally as important. Get my Advanced Lessons for proper training: http://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore

  14. http://noura says

    Hi Liz

    is it ok to put comma before “while” in the introduction?

  15. http://Prati says

    Hi Liz
    Your website is the best website for students preparing for IELTS and you are really a great teacher. I watched your advanced lessons and I am truly impressed by the explanation you have given. It cleared all my doubts but I am still confused regarding the “Discuss” essay. You talked about this type of essay in one of your videos but I could not find any pdf or example of the essay from where I can get an idea that what structure I need to follow for that type of essay. I have seen an essay statement in which the examiner only asks to discuss in IDP’s book so I am really concerned that it may appear in exam. Could you please reply and clear my doubt. Thank you in advance.

    • With the Discussion Essay Advanced lesson, there is a model essays under the video that you can download which shows the structure of a Discussion essay without an opinion.

  16. http://Asmita says

    thank you for all your lessons they are really useful
    i have my exam tomorrow and i am really worried and tensed how my test will be .

  17. http://Vipra says

    Hi Liz,
    I would like to thank you for the enormous efforts made by you for all of u. It is really a good platform for the needy people who can’t afford a good native teacher. God bless you. Thanks a lot

  18. http://Rouby says

    Hi Liz
    Thanks a lot for your the effort behinds your fabulous blog
    I have a question:
    Is it okey to use or not to use the word “that”after think or believe
    For Example :
    On the one hand, many think it is easier
    On the one hand, many think that is is easier

    Is it the same .


  19. http://Divya says

    Thanks Liz for your valuable advice and guidance on IELTS , its been extremely helpful.
    My exam is on 2-Jun and I have a couple of queries.
    First, in the above model, the question talks about discussing both sides and then asks for opinion. however, in the answer we discuss the opinion in the Introductory passage. Would it be incorrect to opine in the Conclusion para rather than the Introduction para?
    Second, is it necessary for the body paragraphs to have the same number of points. E.g. if two advantages have been stated then we would also need two disadvantages?

    Thanks in advance.

    • http://Liz says

      The opinion is equally as important as the discussion. That means your whole essays must tackle both – not just one single paragraphs at the end of your essay.

  20. http://Ogoo says

    Hi Liz, you said in one of your videos that a body paragraph should contain like 5 complex sentences, but your essay above has 2 and 3 complex sentences in body para 1 and 2 respectively. Please, does it mean that 2 complex sentences are enough for a body paragraph?

    • http://Liz says

      If you have 5 paragraphs (3 body paragraphs) then obviously you will have about 65 words in each. Just your use common sense. Your essay will usually be around 270 to 290 words in total. So divide it up with body paragraphs being longer than conclusion or introduction. Also I am a native speaker. This means my complex sentences are 100% accurate. Are your complex sentences as accurate you mine? Do you think you should aim to have the same length of sentence? Of course not. You aim is to avoid errors, so control the length of your sentences to produce fully accurate sentences. Please try to use your common sense when using model essays. This is an explain of a band 9 essay from a native speaker.

  21. http://NOOR says

    Dear Liz ,
    I would like to thank you for your brilliant blog!although I found about it late,just 3 weeks before my test ,which was on 21 OF April , but it was enough for me to get an overall band score of 7 which i was struggling to get ,because of my low band score in writing . Now I managed to get 6.5 which is for me is great as i was stuck on 5.5 for long time before that .. I must say that it worth every minute i spend it on this blog , specially the writing brilliant tips and the advanced lesson which gave me the confidence to approach the task without being worried about the limited time . much appreciated . thanks again

    • http://Liz says

      I’m really happy to read your message. It’s great that you finally got the score you deserve 🙂 I’m glad my advanced lessons helped – well done 🙂

      • http://Sorath%20Asnani says

        Hi Liz,
        I have been posting my comments for last 2 days. The following message is displayed at the top of the comment, “Your comment is awaiting moderation”. I am afraid if they are not posted correctly. Your reply to my comment can confirm it. Thanks.

        • http://Liz says

          Sorry but I do not offer a guaranteed question/answer service. This website is to use my lessons and tips.

          • http://Sorath%20Asnani says

            Yes, I can understand. Your website is really beneficial.
            Bundle of thanks for your efforts.

  22. http://raman says

    Some people think that should be limited theoretical work and more practical work in academic institutions .To what extent agree or disagree ?

  23. http://Esma says

    Hey liz,
    We love u soo muchh and we have something in our minds

    Our teacher said that you should not give your opinion in the “discuss both views and give your opinion” essay. She told us you should do this just in conclusion part.

    What should we doooo plssss help us !! 🙂

  24. http://Nut%20atirah says

    Hye liz, is it true that words ‘pros and cons’ cannot be used for academic writing?

  25. http://T.A. says

    Hi, my name is TA.
    Love your content. I consider myself as a native speaker, but the information in this website really strengthened my understanding of the criteria I’m being tested on.
    I have a question regarding writing task 2…
    Are we allowed to bring in statistics from the real world and use it in my essay? Or am I limited to the information provided by the question?

    • http://Liz says

      Having excellent English isn’t enough for IELTS writing. It’s fine for the speaking test, but the writing test does have specific criteria that you need to meet. You can use examples to support your ideas in writing task 2. However, it doesn’t actually mean using statistics. Sure you can use data but it isn’t going to improve your score if you have numbers rather than descriptive examples. All IELTS essays are based on current issues that exist in the world, so using information about the topic is good. Some teachers always tell students to present numbers, but this isn’t actually required. Remember this is a language test, not a fact test. You will see in one of the model essays on this page I use stats but in another essay I don’t: http://ieltsliz.com/model-answers-for-ielts-essays-january-2018/.

  26. http://addie%20girixx says

    Hi.I have my ielts exams on feb 3 and im really having problem with writing task 2.Can you please look at this question and review my answer?

    Some people believe that university students should be allowed to study whatever they like.Others argue that they should only be allowed to study subjects which helps them in future like science and technology.

    Discuss both the views and write your opinion.

    My Answer essay:

    It is often argued by some people that tertiary students have to opt for the subject according to their choice whilst many disagree and think that they should only learn books beneficial for their future connected to science and technologies.However, in my opinion, students should have right to study what they desire and this essay will discuss both the views.

    It is clear that learners who study the course of their choice enjoys huge benefits.Firstly, they can have more freedom and get comfortable with the subject.This will eventually help them grasp knowledge easily and with minimum hindrance.It is almost impossible to absorb any ideas if the topic studied is out of preferred context.Secondly, it leads to hetregeneous nature among the students.In other words, they will be able to develop their own independent creations which provokes innovation.For instance,legendary musician john petrucci studied music against his fathers will who became one of the biggest artist in the music history.

    However, others disagree with this and favour a centralised course of study like science and technology to be undertaken by them.Learning about these subjects secures future and contributes toward a superior carrear growth.There will be advancement in technological revolution and bulking manpower.Despite this, every individual preference differs and having them undertake this course without any option brings discouragement and stress.Therefore, this essay disagrees with this statement.For instance, sachine tendulkar wouldnot had been a cricketer if his parents had forced him towards physics and engineering.

    In conclusion, while some people choose to allow young minds just into intrepreting theories and structures to secure tommorrow,it is important to let them have a freedom of choice so that they will gain skills smoothly and produce fresh thoughts.

    Thankyou 🙂

  27. http://rahul says

    my question is regarding speaking test if u can plz help me out ?
    Can I use the word SIR/MAM repeatedly to examiner?

    like if they are asking what is your favourite food..so can i answer like SIR/MAM my favourite food is …………………………??

  28. http://Nita%20Aprilia says

    Hi Liz. Hope you are doing great!

    I recently do some exercise on Writing Task 2 until I found a question essay written as: “Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scietific research, business and the academic world. other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.” (Cambridge IELTS 12 Test 5 page 28)

    At first I thought it was questioning about information that being shared for the research, business and academic world (or purpose). “While others think it should not be shared freely” (I didn’t thought it’s related with the money, freely= don’t need to pay), I thought it refers to some information which is a secret to be known by public.

    What do you think it referes to?
    Thank you!

    • http://Liz says

      See the words: “free” and “freely”. To “share for free” means without cost – no payment. To “share freely” means to share without censor. This means the government doesn’t stop it – to share without restriction. It’s about how sensitive the information is. Would it be risky to share. That is actually the meaning.

  29. http://Surabhi%20Sharma says

    Hello Liz
    Can I write introduction like this?
    It is thought by some people that the most effective method to get a good placement is by completing university degree but it is argued by some that practical knowledge and good soft skills are more significant. In my opinion, both statements are true to some extent and it depends on individual what type of job they aspire for.
    Kindly let me know.

    • http://Liz says

      Try changing your thesis statement:
      It is thought by some people that the most effective method to get a good placement is by completing university degree but it is argued by some that practical knowledge and good soft skills are more significant. In my opinion, whether to have tertiary education or skills depends on the type of job an individual aims for.
      Kindly let me know.

      • http://Surabhi%20Sharma says

        Thank you for your valuable feedback.

      • http://Tavleen%20Singh says

        In discussio,Instead of writing .. In my opinion……
        Can we write it as- This essay will discuss why……but why……is more superior.

        • The word “this essay will …” does not express YOUR opinion. This means you would lose marks because you have failed to present your own clear opinion.

  30. http://Sabina%20Tamang says

    Dear ma’am, please kindly evaluate my essays, i really need some help on it

    There is no doubt that higher education are the path of success in each and every individuals’s life.Many people think that completing university education are the jubilee ladder to get a standard job from a known companies. In my opinion, completion of education and experienced soft skills, both enrolls the major role in our life to get a good jobs.

    On the one hand, many people think that graduating from a reputed university with good degree reflects the great opportunities for employment. Completing university education are the first step to apply for recruitment process in related field. Graduated students will be able to show their learnt skills and knowledge for their further journey of life. And it is accepted as the precious ornament of every individuals. Learning about different sorts of educational activities related to subject field will make them good assets for the organizations where they can share their skills and knowledge that has been learnt theoretically. In terms of their good academic qualification, every individuals will able to grab the standardize jobs opportunities in their relevant field.

    On the other hand, other people also think that getting experiences and developing soft skills is more essential to be part of any organizations. Experienced and developed soft skills are the supporting chain for the standardize jobs. Every Individuals having experiences brings the innovative change in their working performances. Development of organizations fully depends upon the role of employee who are experienced practically. Experienced candidates will be lifted with good job opportunity in the reputed organizations as well as will be paid up highly.

    In my prospective, some basic training and interns are also enhance the important role to get good job in coming days. In addition, candidates having good personalities and well manner will provide the direction for better job opportunities. However, graduating from reputed university show the goof impact on getting a standard job where experiences and developing soft skills is also essential for employment opportunity.

  31. http://Kunchang%20Moktan says

    There is no doubt that certain criteria should be match while applying for a good job. One need a good academic qualification along with some prior work experience in order to get a high level job in targeted field while lack in having one component may lead you to get a job below your expectation and qualification.

    To begin with, some people believe that individual must get their university degree to get a good job and it is the best possible way than others. They think that having a good educational qualification is a key of success in securing high level job. More importantly, they marked it as a primary criteria for any recruitment procedures whereas candidate having below university degree will find hard to get a well paid job.

    In contrary, others believe that there is other important ways than getting a university degree. They think that people should focus on gaining work experience by working as a intern and volunteers in organization and give more priority to develop their soft skill rather than concentrating only on academic skill. In the real working field, your job will demand more basic skills, sound knowledge and more importantly prior working experience while dealing with your assigned day to day tasks It will be very easy to perform challenge for those people who already have sufficient basic skills while academic skill and theoretical knowledge will be much needful for time of examination.

    Therefore, I personally believe that candidate having a pleasing personality and good manner may have high chance of selection while applying for job. Hence, people should separate some time and make some efforts to develop their personality more presentable along with completing the university degree and developing soft skill and gaining some work experience.

    P.S. – I kindly request you to evaluate my essay and provide some feedback for improvement with expected band score. Thanks in advance.

  32. http://Charles%20Ray says

    Hi Liz,
    Could I mention the points which I want to say next in the topic sentences.
    Or I just need to paragraph the question “Some think that…..” in topic senteces, then I write my pionts.(Firstly,.. Secondly,…)

    • A topic sentence is the first sentence of the paragraph. The role of the topic sentence is to explain the content of the body paragraph. All following sentences support and explain the topic sentence. Linking words should be used flexibly. Think about getting my advanced writing task 2 lessons because they will explain everything in great detail, step by step: http://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore

  33. Hi Liz
    Is it mandatory to make a separate paragraph for your opinion in a discussion essay or can we write the whole essay without it?
    Thank you

  34. http://Lolo says

    Dear Liz,

    Please guide me if I am wrong.

    In the opinion essay, one-sided opinion, the body paragraph 1 should have one main idea which reflects why you agree or disagree, like ( it benefits society).

    In the discussion essay, the main idea of the body paragraph 1 is already given in the statement,which is “other people think that something is good”
    and we can then, depending on the topic, put many supporting ideas under this, like ( it benefits society, it benefits the individual, economic growth.. )
    And that would not be against the rule of having one central main idea in each body paragraph.

    I do not know if anything of what I wrote above makes sense,
    Or I am complicating things again🙈
    Thank you very much ❤

    • I would like to answer but, really, I don’t understand. You might have to write this question again with examples so I can understand.

  35. http://Essmarika says

    Hyy Liz plzz give rank to my essay……
    Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime.Others, however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.discuss both views..

    In contemporary era, criminal activities are increasing day-to-day.not only young people but also mature citizens are committing serious crime.i agree that there should be provision of punishing the people who encourage indiomatics to commit crime.however,there must be separate punishment looking at the nature of crime commited by an individual.

    Recently,the rate of crime in Nepal is increasing rapidly.for instance,a father killed his daughter who was just running on her 11.there was no any meaningful reason to kill that innocent girl, rather there was someone else who encourage him to commit such serious crime.in such case,not only the person committing crime but also the master mind should be punished.there are other more examples for such crime.this was the case of jhapa,which took place a week before.However, the punishment is given only for individual who committed crime.this may encourage motivators and master mind to support other people to committe some serious crime.While I think if government pass the rule for punishing master mind .this will automatically discourage people to support wrong dower. Which plays vital role in decreasing crime in society.

    I believe that,there must be separate punishment for individual looking at the crime committed.India, is the best example for punishing the criminal according to their crime.however,there are many other countries who punish criminal looking at the crime.but in Nepal we do not have such system.i agree,that punishment should be separate as the crime is different.for example,the murderer should be punished by death penalty.If some of the killer get such punishment then other criminal minded people will be scare and aware of the punishment.while,such provision plays primary role in lowering the rate of crime. through some minor punishment should be passed by the government for minor crime.punishment like prison and money penalty should be conducted.i think punishment should be given to all the wrong dower.
    In conclusion, punishment is the most appropriate way to eradicate the number of crime n criminal.in my opinion,both wrong dower and the motivators should be punished according to crime.it is the most important factor to decrease crime in the world.

  36. http://Muhammad%20Ali says

    I loved your second Tip, i talked about my bother ..that for example my brother bought a watch online and he never used it… i guess i made a big mistake mentioning him as an example.

  37. http://Muhammad%20Ali says

    First of all i would like to thank you for the great effort and time you have put into this blog. It really helped me.
    Now my question is, i am a bit confused in arranging my ideas, i guess i have good vocabulary, i have a lot of ideas, and i can produce upto 300 words . I have taken IELTS exam twice, at my first attempt i got 6.5, but at my second attempt i got 6. when i took the test for the first time i only knew about 1 type of IELTS question agree and disagree. but after i went through some books i came to know about other forms of IELTS task 2 questions. Other than Cause and solution question. I am very much confused with these question, now i have concluded that they all are the same. Basic concept is agree or disagree because the more i look itno it , more confusing it gets for me.
    Please Help.

    • IELTS writing task 2 is about the following:
      1) addressing the issue in the task. You also need to identify the main issue(s)
      2) following instructions. If the instructions ask for both sides and an opinion – you give both sides and your opinion. If the instructions only ask for your opinion, you only give that.
      3) keeping a formal style – this means not writing about your brother but about people in general
      4) avoiding grammar errors – controlling the length of your sentences and using good punctuation
      5) avoiding learned expressions – each sentence should be uniquely created by you
      6) using appropriate vocabulary and not over paraphrasing
      7) using a range of linking words
      8) expanding ideas with relevant information
      If you want training in IELTS writing task 2, get my advanced lessons – they are simple to understand and explain techniques in depth: http://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore

      • http://Gurdeep says

        Hii liz
        First of all thank u for such a beneficial materials.i want to confirm that in (discuss both sides and give opinion) eassy.should we discuss our own opinion in seperate body paragraph means body paragraph 3

  38. http://sunny says

    i think liz did a very good job. cuz she specify what is “good job”

    the argument point is what is good job and the condition is nobody can get a “good” job but they ought to get a appropriate job

  39. http://Liah says

    Thanks for sharing this. If i am planning to write a balanced approach , is the below introduction correct?

    Although it is sometimes thought that pursuing tertiary education is the ideal way to get a promising job, other people believe that gaining experience and developing soft skills are more important. In my opinion , i consider that deciding whether to complete university education or acquiring soft skills depends on the type of job aspired for.

    Is the paraphrasing appropriate?

    • Sounds great 🙂

      • http://Liah says

        Thanks a lot Liz. that comment really made my day 🙂 ..
        I owe big time to you and your advanced lessons on writing. Those are really amazing. I regret that i didn’t subscribe them in my first attempt of ielts where i scored 7(Listening-8 Reading-7.5 Writing-6 Speaking-7). writing 🙁

        My exam is scheduled for Dec 02 and need to score atleast 7 in each section. Fingers crossed!!!

  40. http://Mostafizur%20Rahman says

    Hello Liz,
    Every time I come to your blog, I get to learn something new. This helps me to work on my mistakes for which I was not able to get my desired score.

    I would like to know if I should mention number of words at the end of my essay for both Task 1 and Task 2.


    • http://Liz says

      You definitely do NOT write the word count. There is no time for it and the examiners will count the words for themselves.

  41. Hi Liz!

    I am interested about the question from Kamlinder:
    “Discussion Essay statement:–
    Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.”
    I believe the first thing we should do to answer this by paraphrasing the question. Yet I wonder, since It is a quite long sentence and the question divide into 2 main part, do we have to combine those two into 1 paraphrase sentence OR it’s ok to make 2 sentence before we arrived to our opinion?

    Also, I made a version of mine. I want to know your thought about it if you don’t mind.

    There are two main opinions regarding punishment implementation for criminal act, either it should be rigid despite of whatever the action is, and, the law should also consider about the reason behind the act and the condition that make the person commit the unlawful act. In my opinion, only those who planned for criminal act deserve the fixed while if that illegal act was performed as an immediate response to protect themselves, they have the right to defend themselves.

  42. http://Cindy%20Todoc says

    hi liz, in your sample above for discussion essay: work – i am just a little confused so I want to confirm with you, you are agreeing on both points right? is it okay to do that in discussion essay… I hope you respond. I have an exam end of Sept and I’m having difficulty with Writing test, its my second exam by the way. I got 6.5 last time but I need at least 7.

  43. hey LIZ
    i struggle with writing conclusions
    what should i put in a conclusion?

  44. http://chi%20jung says

    hi mom , the question discuss advantage and disadvantage is it discussion essay ?

    • It is an adv/disadv essay. Some teachers classify this as a discussion essay but it is different because it uses different language.

  45. http://Ashmita says

    Hello Liz, I wanted to know if I can use only 2 body paragraphs in the discussion essay if I agree with only one view. Is it appropriate to write lesser points in the first body paragraph to the side I disagree and write more points in the second body paragraph as “Firstly”, “secondly” and so on to the side I agree in order to show my one sided approach?
    Hope to hear from you,

  46. http://Francesca says

    Hi Liz! Your study material is amazing and is helping me a lot to prepare for IELTs. I have a few questions. In the Discussion Essay type (as the one you have posted above), do we need to always write a separate paragraph for our opinion (e.g. body: Finally, in my opinion…)? If my opinion concurs with one of the two sides, then can I just have two body paragraphs ( A and B side ) because I stated in my thesis that I concurred with one of them?
    Also, I was wondering if we are allowed to use any white-out to erase pen during the exam and if we are given some additional papers to write the layout for the organization of our essays.
    Thank you so much you’re such a great teacher!!!!!

    • http://Liz says

      Yes, if your opinion is the same as one of the sides, you can put your opinion together in that body paragraph which will give you only two body paragraphs in total. I’m not sure if you can take white out into the test room – you would need to ask. There is no extra paper for planning – you plan on the question paper. If you need more training, you can purchase my advanced writing task 2 lessons which give in depth explanations about each type of essay: http://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore

  47. http://kamlinder%20singh says

    Discussion Essay statement:–
    Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

    Although it is sometimes thought that for various crimes punishment ought to be fixed, other people believe that crime situation and inspirational factor should be taken into consideration. In my opinion, i consider that it is better to judge each crime individually.

    I’m nor sure about my introduction statement. Please let me know whether its is right or wrong?
    or plz suggest what can i improve in that.

    • http://Liz says

      Your technique is correct but there are errors which grammar and vocab. Be careful making new words “crimes punishment” is not a word = various punishments for crimes. The words “inspirational factor” are inappropriate to the topic – you need “motivation” which is not the same as inspirations. Yes, you will see that inspiration is a synonyms for motivation but it not for the topic of crime and punishment. You need to understand that synonyms do not mean they are the same in all situations and all context. From this I can see you understand the techniques but you are trying to impress and making mistakes with vocabulary. Aim for accuracy – do NOT aim to impress.

  48. http://Zaid%20Almahmoud says

    Do I lose marks for reusing keywords from this sample answer? For example: “Many think that”, “according to some”, “On the one hand”, “On the other hand”, “It is thought by some that”. It is important for me to know, because I am trying to follow the model answers as my template in the exam.

    • http://Liz says

      Templates should be used flexibly. Your linking method will depend on your main points and the aim of the essay. Never memorise just one template.

  49. http://Daria says

    Hi Liz! Thank you for all the good advice you share with us. Specially, these essay models, which are great study material for students like me preparing to take the exam.
    After doing your advanced lessons, I came across the following essay question: “Some people feel crime rates are best lowered by increasing prison sentences”. Discuss this topic. What are some alternatives to raising prison sentences?
    In this case, it is not clear to me whether I have to give my opinion or not. Also, I think I have to discuss both sides, even though they only introduce one, is that right? What is the correct approach to write an introduction and conclusion for this essay?
    I’d be greatful if you can help me with these doubts.

    • http://Liz says

      In this case, you just follow instructions:

      BP1 = One side = people feel crime rates are best lowered by increasing prison sentence
      BP2 = Other side = increasing prison sentences isn’t the best way
      BP3 = other ways to lower crime rate (more police on streets / rehabilitation)

      Just present the information in that way.

  50. http://Amy says

    Hi Liz! Thanks for sharing this essay! I noticed you included your opinion in the introduction and body of the paragraph. Is it always that way?Can I state my opinion in the conclusion only?

    • http://Liz says

      The instructions ask for your opinion and also the discussion. That means the entire essay will follow these instructions.

  51. http://Mazin%20H says

    Greetings Liz,
    I want to ask you about the length of task 2 essay, will there be any trouble in going beyond 300 words? Sometimes it’s hard for me to confine myself within the limit 260-280 you mentioned in one of your videos, so if all my ideas are relevant and on point, would there be any problem?

    • http://Liz says

      If you go beyond 300 words, it will give you more chances to make mistakes with grammar and vocabulary. Also you should be aiming for direct ideas, clear explanation, without too much length and accurate English. Think of purchasing my advanced lessons to see how this can be done: http://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore

  52. http://Maryam%20zafar says

    Hi Liz, I have written a response to this question without reading the model essay. Could you please tell me which band I am likely to secure? And any suggestions please?
    Completion of higher education is considered as a vital step for one’s professional progression. Anyhow, getting skilled and experienced in various fields is also detrimental for professional grooming and economic independence. In my opinion, some practical skills must be attained by students during their educational journey but they must complete their university education first in order to get ensured economic stability later on and shouldn’t be relying wholly upon soft skills. These additional skills must be seen as a top up in their career building.

    Undoubtedly, university education, is accomplished successfully, promises wide chances of getting a white-collar job. Consequently, successful university graduates enjoy a prosperous and secure future with less risks of economic downfall and job instability.

    Moreover, the first prerequisite for any employment position is most frequently a degree in some particular field. Then the relevant experience follows. So, completion of education is a must for securing a good job.

    On the other hand, the claim that development of practical skills and experience counts more also has some weightage. If try, we could spot many successful entrepreneurs and renowned businessmen who have had a very tough professional path and are not highly qualified but they are doing well with their business.

    However, we must keep in mind that entrepreneurship is not a bed of roses and they might have kept their everything at stake while struggling to reach at this level. There must be years of countless efforts, struggles, hardships, rejections and failures. So, one must keep pros and cons of full time entrepreneurship or business before stepping into it.

    To be at safe side, this is highly advisable to complete university education before starting a business venture in order to avoid utter disappointment if the business fails.

    Apart from that, some students opt for part time skill development and jobs to enhance their professional capability while studying. In my view, this is really a thoughtful and practical approach towards career building. At the end, they are in a better position than those who relied completely on soft skills or education.

    To conclude, I would suggest that one must complete their education to have wider prospects of securing a better employment but at the same time, one must be looking for opportunities to attain additional experience and soft skills to be self sufficient and to make a better job profile.

  53. http://Rahul%20S%20Sinena says

    Hi Liz,
    Your tutorials are really good. I want to thank you creating such a nice and informative site for IELTS.
    Liz, in many of the writing essay questions we see a statement saying “include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience” . But in most of the band8/band9 answers i never see real life example. kindly Explain what do we have to do when “relevant examples from knowledge ” have been asked for

    Rahul S Sinena

    • http://Liz says

      Examples from your experience of life do not need to be about your friends or people you know. They should be examples of the world in general from your perspective. “For example, the majority of people ….” This is an example of your knowledge. Always remember that the essays is formal. Also you don’t need to put examples in unless you want to. Examples can come in different forms: “In today’s world ….” that is actually an example of your knowledge of the world.

  54. http://Saira says

    Dear Liz,

    I hope you are going great. Firstly, thanks a lot for this focused website and great assistance you are providing by replying your students’ questions.

    I have a query regarding discussion essay. The question states, “Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.” Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

    To attempt the answer, Could I first talk about the people work on different places and then about the ones who stick with the same organisation? Would it cause marks deduction?

    One more favor, would you please tell my English mistakes in this comment?

    May you prosper more,

    • http://Liz says

      It would affect your score for Coherence and Cohesion which is 25% of your marks for task 2. This criterion relates to logical organisation of information. It introduce one order of information and then switch will confuse the reader and is not considered logical.

      • http://Nisha says

        Hi Liz.. I think what this reader had probably meant to ask was if the introduction presents the two views in a discussion essay in a different order from the question but continues with the same new sequencing as per the intro in the body paragraphs, is it ok?

        • Why would anyone think of doing that? It’s best to stick to the given format and be consistent. It never helps to confuse the examiner.

  55. http://greens says

    HI LIZ,
    First of all,thank you for ur wonderful site.I am going to appear for the exam on this saturday.Still i have a doubt regarding discussion essay.if it asks like discuss both views and give your opinion,can i write like this:
    introduction with my opinion
    BP1(Including my opinion)
    BP2(opposite view)
    conclusion with opinion
    kindly give me a reply

  56. http://Elodie says

    Hi Liz,

    thank you so much for your website and your Youtube Channel which are both really helpful.

    I have a question regarding the Discussion Essay’s plan. In my opinion a 3 body paragraphs plan (pros, cons and opinion), like in the model above, seems logical and relevant.

    While looking at a video about Essays planning, I found a teacher who made a 2 body paragraphs plan (pros and cons), only giving his opinion in the introduction.

    I would love to hear your thoughts about this.
    Thank you again for all your useful informations.
    Have nice week end.

    • http://Elodie says

      Thank you Liz ! Everything is clear for me now.

      Your offer is tempting but I take the test next Saturday and I think I’m done now. I only planned light work and a lot of rest for next week.

      Thank you so much again Liz. You are an amazing teacher.

  57. http://JITHIN%20G%20ALEYAS says

    Hi Liz
    I am Jithin…. Preparing ielts right now, regularly I go through your post, it’s really beneficial…
    I have a doubt one task 2
    Many people believe that, formal pen and paper examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievements. What is your view of examination.

    In this essay I agree with this statement that conventional mode of examinations are out dated.
    So what should I include..?
    The advantages of modern examination technology or disadvantages of conventional examination?

    Some times we get these kinds of questions.i really facing difficulties in these kinds of questions.

    If possible give your advice?
    Thank you

    • http://Liz says

      I don’t know where you got this essay question. The instructions “What is your view of examination.” are not from IELTS. Check where you got this essay question from and also check that you have written it correctly.

  58. http://Saade says

    hey liz, saade here.
    i was wondering if i could skip the last conclusion paragraph since it repeats most of whats in my last body paragraph. i have seen some model essays with 4 detailed paragraphs.
    in which cases is it acceptable? (i got my exam tomorrow and im hoping for a band score of 8 or above)

  59. http://SUNNY%20MANHAS says

    Hi liz,
    Should we use modals more instead of helping verbs in task2 ?

    • You use a range of tenses, sentence structures and language for a high score. You don’t aim to use one more than the other. Just use appropriate language which showcases your range and accuracy.

  60. http://Kieroles%20Mikhael says

    Hi Liz,
    Actually, all your lessons are great.
    I wish you re-do the offer on advanced lessons again

  61. http://pandher says

    Hello ma’am
    I want to know what exactly is the difference between agree/disagree and discussion/give opinion essay.
    Actually i aligned to one side completely in my essay which states to discuss both views and give your opinion
    Is it wrong??
    Moreover, i also wrote ‘i agree with this……’ in introduction.
    Does it effect my scores.

  62. http://Nestoras says

    Good afternoon Liz! Thank you very much for all your help!
    In a discussion essay, when the prompt asks for our opinion and our opinion stands solely with one of the two aspects. Should it be advisable to state our opinion only in the introduction, or we should restate it in the paragraph where we elaborate on the aspect that we stand for, using again one of the phrases that you taught us (in my opinion, I think, I believe)?

  63. http://Fahad says

    Hi Liz,

    Really appreciate the way you are helping people to get prepared for their IELTS. Your video lessons are really thoughtful and well prepared. Just one question on a subject essay; the topic called for the perspective of people, competing for a job, with skills or without skills but having an education. Whereas, in your essay, the second argument is about business as a good fit for people with no formal education. How do you see it, are you not going away from the topic?

    • This topic is about people who focus on education or people who don’t focus on education and aim for skills and experience instead. This means the latter group don’t have university education because they preferred to get work experience instead. It’s a really common topic in IELTS writing.

  64. http://Sitora says

    Hi Liz! Can you help me about thesis? What is thesis? I can’t understand about it? Can you show any examples?

  65. http://celine says

    H Liz,
    Firstly, I want to appreciate your effort to help us. My question is that whether or not it is okay to state my own opinion in my conclusion in ”discuss both sides essays” after discussing the ideas given in the statement rather than in the introduction.

  66. http://Dany says

    Hi Liz,

    I cannot stress enough how crucial your website has been for my IELTS preparation.
    I have a question regarding the “discuss both views and give your opinion” type of essay.
    Can i incorporate my opinion in the second body paragraph, or a seperate paragraph is needed in order to achieve a good score? (i need at least 7,5)

  67. http://Abdul%20samad%20zafar says

    Hello Liz, in discussion essay model, should we give our opinion in the conclusion or in the thesis statement. I have a test on 29th of October. It is requested to please answer before it

  68. http://Kamal%20Din says

    Helo Liz! m much happy wd ur lessons.they are more informative and vital to pass an ielts exam. . i have one confusion when to give one sided opinion and when to give a balanced opinion.. .? thanx

  69. http://Abhisek says

    Hey Liz,

    Should we write about our Opinion if the question only says “Discuss both views.”

  70. http://Abhisek says

    Hey Liz,

    Is it a must to write a seperate paragraph for our own opinion or can we mention that shortly in conclusion. I have a exam soon , so hope you reply quick as possible.


  71. http://Ana%20Carolina%20Francisco says

    Hy Liz, what would happen if I don´t write about all topics, as did? In my case, I just mentioned “experience” in the introduction, but them I forgot it.

  72. http://nick says

    hey liz, thanks for your lessons

    i have a doubt

    in discussion type of essay can we write 2-3 ideas all together in one para..

    for example :explain use of interent and discuss both sides.

    in first para i write my frist idea 1: internet is useful
    why it is useful ?explain one sentence
    second idea:internet is cheap source of communication
    how it is cheap?explain in one sentence
    third idea: internet can be used easily
    how it is used easily?expalin in one sentence

    is such paragraph can lead to a band score of =>7

  73. http://Lara says

    Hi Liz!

    Thanks a lot for your wonderful site! 🙂 It is really great and unique.

    I have one quick question on the discussion essay – is it OK if I share my opinion at the end? I think it looks more logical to put first 2 paragraphs on the discussion of the subject and then my opinion at the end.
    Otherwise, it is a bit misleading if I share different poinsts of view together with my opinion at the beginning and then continue with discussion of “others”. What is the right approach as per examiners? I saw many different approaches, so I am a bit confused.

    Many thanks in advance!

    • http://Liz says

      The opinion is of equal importance as the discussion. The conclusion should restate ideas, not state them for the first time.

  74. http://Prasad%20Surendran says

    Hi Liz,

    A question for you, In your model answer, you mentioned your opinion is that getting education is the best way to get the job, but in the conclusion you mentioned that it is depended on the job we are trying to apply. could you please explain this?

    • http://Liz says

      My opinion was given in the introduction “In my opinion, I believe that having university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.”. You can see that my opinion is divided between academic jobs and business related jobs – this is called a balanced approach.

  75. http://hashirrehman says

    education system of your country is this system compare to the international education standard or not
    essay on 250 words

  76. http://mini says

    Some people think about learning a foreign language but cannot use it frequently. What are the difficulties that people face while learning a foreign language? What can be done to overcome them

  77. http://Muna says

    Hi Liz,
    I am grateful to you.Your lessons are helping me a lot.

    I have a question.When the question asks ‘to what extent do you agree with the statement’, do I need to support a single side or I need to explain the points of both sides and state clearly at which points I agree or disagree?

    • http://Liz says

      When the instructions as for your opinion, then your whole essay contains your opinion and nothing more.

      • http://Ayesha%20Bilal says

        Hi Liz,
        I wanted your help with this. If I discuss both sides in an agree/disagree , how will i make my essay more academic and different from discuss both sides question?

      • http://Leyla says

        Hi Liz. I have a question if you have time. In discussion essay if I do not agree with the statement how can I write it? For exampla, continuous coverage of sport discourages the young from taking part in any sport. i mean thesis and body paragraph. I wrote introduction. Please help me. I have a month left to the exam. Thank you very much

        • http://Leyla says

          In my opinion, I believe that non-stop broadcasting makes the old less enthusiastic about engaging in sports while it encorages teenagers to participate in sports. I tried to writr balanced approach. is it right? or cannot I mention the old? I know you do not give feedback. If I take your time sorry

        • http://Liz says

          I suggest you get my discussion essay advanced lessons to understand exactly what to do: http://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore

  78. http://Sammani%20perera says

    When it says “Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss” here we should discuss both sides right? Although it doesn’t explicitly state that both sides should be discussed

  79. http://AbtinSaadati says

    Hi Liz I’m Abtin I want you to write a writing for me about internet and books in 4 paragraphs for my ielts with 250 words

  80. http://shahida says

    hey lliz hope you fine. me going to appear in ielts test kindly suggest me some topics regarding to academic writing module

  81. http://Drew says

    Hi Liz,
    I would like to ask if its ok to change the order of my body paragraph if I chose to agree with the second opinion in a discussion essay?

    Thank you in advance

  82. Hi liz, recently i got 5.5 in my ielts exam and i got just 5 band in writing section but my requirement is 6 that is why i filled another exam of ielts and date of this exam is 19 dec so pls help me nd give some steps how can i improve my band in writing module….

  83. http://Joharra says

    Hi Liz its me again,
    Question about Discussion Essay paraphrasing general statement.
    Here is a piece of a question taken from an IELTS Discussion Essay–>”There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year…….. Discuss both sides.”
    I am confused how will I paraphrase this. I know in discussion essay, discussion languages should be use except where my opinion is. Should I always include discussion essay languages (“many people think”, etc) all the time even, for this example, it does not say “some, most people”. Should I just add “many” or “some”? Or just simply paraphrase the sentence? I hope my question makes sense.

  84. http://Emmanuel says

    Hello Liz,
    i have watched some of your videos on youtube, you are doing a great job, i must appreciate your efforts.
    I need some clearification from you on the two questions below.
    ‘completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job.on the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.’ following the model answer i saw on your page, you gave your opinion twice on this question ,that is after you paraphrased the question and immediately after discussing the second side of the question.Does this apply to all discussion essays or it depends on the question? I am saying this because this other question below is asking for my opinion after i must have discuss the two sides.
    some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves.
    Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

  85. http://Raine says

    Hi Liz, Is it really necessary to cite your opinion on the introduction for this type of essay? From my point of view, you have to discuss two sides first before stating your opinion. Thank you Liz

    • http://Liz says

      Both giving your opinion and discuss both sides are equally important. It does not say “discuss both sides and afterwards give your opinion”. You put both in the introduction, both in the body and your opinion is summarised in the conclusion.

      • http://Raine says

        Thanks for that Liz. Is it also necessary to have an entire paragraph of my opinion? can I incorporate my opinion to the side that I agree with instead of having a separate paragraph for the opinion?

  86. http://Mary says

    Hi Liz,

    In this type of essay (discuss both point of view and give our own opinion): Is it necessary to align myself with one side when I give my opinion?

    I understand that in Agree / Disagree Essays, I should completely align myself with one side but I think in this kind of essay I can just give my opinion without any position.

  87. hi liz I have 2 doubts that is it correct to start one sentence with it?secondly,we need to write both in my opinion and i beleive that together or one is enough?

  88. http://Raine says

    Hi Liz, I am wondering what approach will I use if the question asks me about the advantages outweighing the disadvantages? is this the same for discussing both views? Thank you Liz

    • No, it is asking which one is more important. You need to explain if you think the adv are more important than the disadv or the other way round. There are some tips for this type of question on the writing task 2 page.

      • http://Raine says

        Thanks Liz. I have another question. Is it alright to delay my opinion and mention it on the third paragraph of the essay? this is about discussing both views and citing your opinion. In developing my paragraph for this type of essay, I usually begin with the side that I contradict to. Then on the third paragraph, I usually write this way: However, I disagree because….. Is that a good structure?

        • You must put your opinion in the introduction. Then you can add it to a body paragraph of the side you agree with or you have put it in a third body paragraph to explain it more fully. Both ways are fine. Don’t forget to re-state it in the conclusion.

  89. http://Ridma%20Kondasinghe says

    Thank you Liz

  90. http://Ridma%20Kondasinghe says

    Hello Liz, My problem is when we provided with a question of “Solution giving” problem (not solution and cause) for writing task 2 should we write only solutions? Can’t we give the causes? I would be thankful if you will address my matter.

    • http://Liz says

      You only write about what you are asked for. Any extra information is irrelevant and will lower your score.

  91. http://Gamal%20Thomas says

    Hello Liz , First of all , thank you so much for the invaluable help you give us.

    I also need to ask you two questions if you have time to answer,

    1- How I keep my position or opinion throughout the essay , especially in the discussion essay where I have to present the other view that differs of mine ?

    2 – In a previous IELTS exam I faced with the the word “And” and it was a problem for me, lol. The question was something like that: Modern technology could help in reduce and preventing crime , do you agree or disagree.
    I do not know if the question need two separate paragraphs (one for reducing and the other for preventing) or not …
    If you could clarify it would be great.
    Thank you again Liz

    • http://Liz says

      These questions can’t be explained in just a few lines. If you are struggling with these concepts, I can only suggest you purchase a writing lesson on my course: http://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore Each lesson is about 1 hour in length and explains these issues in detail. It takes quite a long time to explain them fully.
      All the best

  92. http://Rupesh says

    I am pleased to know the clear concept about the both views but when i try to write the essay it’s hard for me to write the introduction paragraph don’t know why. Can you give me some tips about introduction…

    • Most discussion essays ask you to discuss both sides and give your opinion. This dictates your introduction. You should paraphrase the two sides that IELTS have given as your background statement and then write your opinion as your thesis statement.

      • http://Rupesh says

        You mean that we have to write the both opinion of statement in introduction part . 😊

        • Sure. Take a look:

          It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job while there are others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that having university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.

          You can see, above, that both sides are introduced in the first sentence and my opinion is introduced in the second sentence.

          • http://Nahid says

            It is considered by many that prosperous sports professionals get higher remuneration than other professionals but there are some, who unfavor this circumstance and feel it is unfair practice. In my opinion, I certainly believe that higher payments of these renowned sprots professionals need to be equalised ,otherwise this criterion will be adversely affected our modern society.

            Dear liz please check my introduction and provide me feedback that do I in right path to present my introduction in this discussion essay.

            • http://Liz says

              You should be aiming to produce accurate language without errors. This means don’t take chances with vocabulary.Your vocabulary is a serious problem. I suggest your write with more simple language to avoid errors.

          • http://Aynur says

            Hi dear Liz. it is balanced approach. and how can we write one side aprroach? Please give an example if you have time. thanks in advance

  93. http://Fay says

    Hi Liz,

    Thank you for your great discussion essay tutorial (in the course section). It was really helpful. I also need to learn the correct structure and way to write cause/solution essay and wondering if the tutorial for this type of essay could be provided and if you are preparing it, how soon it will be ready?

    Thank you in advance

    • http://Liz says

      At the moment I am working on the adv disadv essay. That will be ready (hopefully) at the end of this month. After that, I’ll do the cause/solution essay – it usually takes me about 3 or 4 weeks to write, film and edit a long video.
      All the best

  94. http://Raymund says

    Thank you teacher Liz, all your sample essays in a variety of ways help me to comprehend depending on the task given. Before, I am very confused how will I start, how will I end, and a big question mark in the body paragraph. But now, little by little, I am able to follow the flow as I read your sample essays on how this examination works. Basically, how to attack a question and how to have a good balance in our own opinions. Your lectures truly give us accurate directions on what IELTS is all about. Thank you very much, I hope I can achieve my desired band score.

  95. http://Farrukh says

    Hi, Liz. sorry when I write discuss essays I do not write my personal opinion!!! But this essay has a personal opinion (in body-III). Is it right? Can I use my personal opinion not only in body or conclusion but also in introduction? Do you have structure on any type of essay? Thank you in advance.

  96. http://Dzung%20Tran says

    Hi Liz,
    I have a few questions.
    Is the essay above written in the balanced approach ? I also wonder whether it is riskier than usual to state your opinion in that way. It seems that the one-side approach is easier, but if I nail the balanced approach then I will get pretty good score. Am I right ?
    Pardon me if my question sounds silly.
    Thank you so much.

    • http://Liz says

      Yes, this is a balanced approach. Both the one-sided and balanced view are fine for a discussion essay. The only problem is with the student’s level of English. If a student’s level of English is low and they struggle to get clear ideas across, the one-sided view is better. You won’t necessarily get a higher score because you tried a balanced approach.

  97. http://Noha%20Faisal says

    Hello miss Liz,
    If you have enough time , could you please have a look on my introduction ?

    Some people support the opinion that is graduating from university is the main reason to have a good job , whereas other brains believe in developing expertness and having experience in that is more useful and essential. In my view, i think that completing your education is more important to get higher job, because we are in educational era that needs more knowledge.
    it is about 60 words.

  98. http://Noha%20Faisal says

    Hello Liz,
    Is it a must to show my opinion in a separate paragraph and introduction or in only one of these ??

    • http://Liz says

      It depends on the type of essay. If it is an opinion essay, your opinion is in the introduction and throughout the entire essay. If it is an adv disadv essay, there is no opinion at all. Read through my model essays to learn more.

      • http://Noha%20Faisal says

        yeah ,, i mean in this kind of essay , the discussion one , there is an opinion showed in introduction and in separate paragraph .

  99. http://Nur says

    It is often considered by some that completing only instuition education is the most effective method to have better job.However,i am of the opinion that improving particular skills are the most essential factor in this case.
    Hello,how is my introduction?

  100. Hello, i have a question regarding the structure for discuss both views. I would like to know if this is also an accepted structure for example.

    Introduction paraphrased question without opinion
    Body paragraph for the first side
    Body paragraph for the other side
    Conclusion with opinion.


    • http://Liz says

      The instructions ask you to discuss both sides and give your opinion. That means those instructions should be contained from the start to finish of your essay. You put your opinion in the introduction, body paragraph and conclusion – the same with the discussion.
      All the best

      • http://Onyenna says

        Hi Liz,

        why did u decide to re-state your opinion again in the last body paragraph after stating it in the introductory paragraph?

  101. http://BS says

    Dear Liz.

    I am struggling with writing, I need 6 bands in writing. Your blog, videos are
    awesome. I have draft a essay, can you please give your valuable feedback and bands to this essay.

    It is to be considered that university graduate is the key to find a promising job while some think that experience and interpersonal skills are essential. In my opinion, university education is necessary for academics job and soft skills for management jobs.

    On the one hand, many people think having university degree helps them in finding excellent career and job, as education clears the basics for the job. To make the idea more clear, I would like to discuss a practical example. Large companies such as Microsoft, Amazon prefer to hire university graduates and trained them according to their needs. Apart from this, during degree individuals study different courses and undergo internship which prepares them for job that’s why countries like Canada encourages international students to come and study.

    On the other hand, Soft skills such as leadership skills enhances the individual personality and helps them to maintain cordial relations with the colleagues. Moreover,
    management and sales jobs require interpersonal skills to get into job.

    Finally, in my opinion, tertiary education, experience and soft skills are equally important. Having inheriting all these skills increased the chances of getting job. In my view, one should work on every aspect to grow chances of getting job.

    In conclusion, getting a job requires a relevant education background and experience depending on the nature of job. One has to work on all aspects to find a appropriate job.


  102. http://Love says

    Hi Liz,
    I would like to ask about this type of discussion essays. You didn’t mention about other people’s point of views on each of the paragraph above. I mean you only discuss about your views on both body paragraphs. Shouldn’t we mention about other people’s views like this ‘supporters of this idea say that…’ And so on? Can you please clarify?
    Many thanks

    • http://Liz says

      There are three body paragraphs. Two which give other people’s views (many think…. / according to some…) and one that gives my opinion. You will see the reference to other people’s views in the topic sentences of the body paragraphs 1 and 2.
      All the best

  103. http://Nihareeca says

    Hi Liz,
    It should be either – ” jogging or running is” or “jogging and running are” right?
    Also, “the metabolic rate increases” instead of “their metabolism rate increases”

    Please correct me if I am wrong


    • http://Liz says

      For your first question, both are correct. For your second question, it should be “the metabolic rate increases”.
      All the best

  104. http://Charvi says

    Hello Liz,

    I would be glad if you would spare some time an judge an essay for me.

    TOPIC- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual and the motivation for committing it should be taken into account when deciding on the punishments.
    Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

    It is suggested by some people that a fixed punishment should be imposed for each type of crime, while others oppose this and believe that the punishment should be decided on the basis of the situation and reason behind committing crime and the encouragement for committing it should also be considered.In my opinion, I agree that a fixed punishment should be levied on criminals.

    On one hand, rules are meant to be followed not to be disobeyed, and should be changed for none. Enforcing a fixed punishment is also a type of rule that the government decides and implements for the serious crimes.Disobedience to these rules would lead the nation towards indiscipline, increase the crime rate and further would hinder the progress of the nation. Thus, a fixed punishments play a vital role in maintaining the nation’s discipline and prosperity.

    On the other hand, some people are not criminals but the situation and their needs force them to commit some serious crimes knowingly or unknowingly, and sometimes the encouragement from the criminal world also plays a significant role for an individual in committing a crime. For such cases the punishments should be decided considering these influential and circumstantial factors.

    Finally, in my opinion if there would not be strict punishments then the criminals would continue committing crimes.For example, if “hanging to death” would not be a punishment for rapists, then they would continue this henious crimes that would destroy a girls’ life and would also proliferate the rape cases in the country.Thus, fixed punishments should be levied on criminals irrespective of the circumstances and motivation.

    To recapitulate, castigating the criminals is important and thus fixed punishment should be enforced to the criminals of each type of crime.

  105. http://Rigs says

    Hi Liz,

    I am enormously grateful to have found your website when I was searching for resources I could use before sitting the IELTS test tomorrow.

    With this essay, I just have grammar clarification to raise, to wit:

    1. Paragraph 2, Sentence 3: shouldn’t the conjoined subject “the competition.. and the increasing..” have plural verb? Show instead of shows? Or can these two be treated as one?
    2. Paragraph 4, Sentence 2: Wouldn’t I commit the error of comma splice or run-on sentence if I just use “,” before “…it is impossible to..”? I just thought “take for example …” part is already one sentence.
    3. Paragraph 4, Sentence 1: Is it necessary to write comma before the verb (depends)?

    Thank you so much! I really am hoping to get 9 (writing).

    Hope all is well.


    • http://Liz says

      For question 1, the noun phrase can be considered as one.
      For question 2, it is used the same as “In terms of, …” so we should use “,” in this sentence. But it can be used in other ways using a different grammar structure without the comma.
      For question 3, no it is not necessary to use a comma. I put it in to help the reader when the noun phrase is long. It’s not required.

      Sounds like you have very good grammar. That is good. Always aim for accuracy in your writing for grammar and vocabulary to reduce your errors. Always aim to answer the question directly and respond to all issues to get a good score in Task Response.
      All the best

      • http://Rigs says

        Hi Liz,

        Thank you so much for your response and for the lessons you are giving here! 🙂 It just took me awhile to reply, though. My apology.

        So, I finally got my test result; and I only got 8.5 in writing. I must have committed some grammar lapses? I don’t know. I’ll sit another IELTS exam by August.

        With that in mind, would you have some sort of paid version of your website where I could send my essays and receive a personalised feedback and marking for them? I have seen some other sites having that service, but I feel like your teaching method or delivery (your video) and writing style (model essays) suit me best and are quintessential.

        Again, thank you so much, Liz!



        • http://Liz says

          Hi Rigs,

          Getting 8.5 in writing is absolutely excellent. It’s only 0.5 from perfect. I once knew an IELTS teacher who was from Singapore and with completely fluent English. She had to take the IELTS test herself but still only got 8.5 in writing and she was an IELTS teacher. Even a native speaker isn’t guaranteed a band 9. Sure band 9 is possible and I’m sure you can get it but you should still be very pleased with 8.5 in writing!!

          Unfortunately, I don’t offer essay marking services because I just don’t have time. I’m pretty flat out with working on this blog and making videos. My advice to you is to find an ex-IELTS examiner to give you writing feedback. I completed the IELTS examiner training in 2008 which is why my advice is safe. So, you need to find someone also qualified to give advice.
          I wish you all the best and I’ll cross my fingers that you’ll get your band 9 🙂

          • http://Rigs says

            Hello Liz,

            I am actually an IELTS teacher in China – I have been for over 3 years now. For now, I really want to be an examiner; and being a non-native speaker of the language (I am from the Philippines), I would have to get a score of 9 in all bands to be successfully accepted (re IELTS examiner).

            Writing seems to be really the most challenging part for me, or for non-native speakers for that matter. I’m giving myself another try this August which would be the deciding factor of my dream career haha.

            Meanwhile, I am preparing for CPE -Advance so I could have more options should I fail to get 9 in all bands in IELTS this August.

            I have been a language teacher for over 12 years. (I’m not that old, though haha. I’ll be 31 this year). Teaching English among Asian students is a very rewarding experience, thus the desire to master the language myself is of significant part of my professional development – if I were to be true to this profession.

            Thanks a lot for taking some of your time to respond. Just want to let you know that you have inspired a lot of people with your blogs and videos. I am one of them. So, I hope you will continue “touching other people’s lives”.

            All the best! 🙂 I would continue visiting your site daily! 😀

            Thanks again.



            • http://Liz says

              Hi Rigs,

              I think it’s great that you’re aiming to be an examiner. I did my examiner training in 2008 but afterwards started teaching instead. I’ve got quite a lot of friends who examine and they really enjoy the freedom it gives and the work itself. Getting band 9 is tough, as you know, even for native speakers so even if you don’t get it the first time, don’t give up. Yes, you’re right, writing is the worst, mainly because of Task Response which so many students can misunderstand. Anyway, I’m sure you’ll be fine. Let me know if you have any concerns.
              Keep in touch

              • http://Rigs says

                Hi Liz,

                I sent you an email thru the email you provided for your video course.

                Looking forward to hearing something from you.


  106. http://Mariya says

    hey liz,
    can i use the term fine skills instead of soft skills?

    • http://Liz says

      Not really. It’s not the same thing. Don’t try to paraphrase all words.
      All the best

  107. http://sara says

    Hi Liz,
    I was wondering what should be the thesis statement of a discussion essay which doesn’t require opinion? Should it be like : in this essay both advantages and disadvantages of … Will be discussed? Or should one main advantage and disadvantage be discribed like this: for example : a public transport system has the main advantage of reducing traffic congestion in cities but it also has some disadvantages for example everyone is forced to pay for it but not everyone gets access to it.

    • http://Liz says

      You would write “People have different opinions about what punishment children should receive for committing crimes. While some people think children should receive adult punishment, others feel it is too harsh.” My background statement introduces the topic and my thesis introduces the two sides. At no time should you turn your discussion essay into an advantage disadvantage essay. And you should never learn a formulaic sentence to memorise and write in your test.
      All the best

  108. http://Mariya says

    hey LIZ, kindly help me improve. please highlight my strongest points (so I can be happy about it) and also weak points so that i improve.

    Some people think that the best approach to acquire a good job is to finish university education whereas others think that in order to get a job experience and development of fine skills are required. In my opinion , to get a good job a person should have university degree which not only educates and teaches him better skills but also gives opportunities to practice.

    Regarding university education, skills taught are based on evidence as a result of streneous research. Having proper knowledge gives an edge to practice skills logically and confidently. University also gives chances to students to have first hand experience in their field by sending them to different workplaces for internship.

    On the contrary , it is considered by some that experience and fine skills development are more essential as compared to higher education. This may be due to the fact that an experienced person is more skillful as compared to an unexperienced man because he spents more time practicing. Hence, the chances of getting job is more in this group.

    In my opinion, university education should be upto the standard which not only departs knowledge but also gives opportunities to polish skills since both are important. One cannot excel in the field without education nor he can show good results with experience only.

    To conclude, getting a good job requires both i.e education and skills to prove worth in the ever growing world of competition.

  109. http://Wahid says

    hello Liz,
    Please help me in identifying the type of the following essay. Is it a discussion or opinion essay?

    Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.

    What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

    Thank you

    • http://Liz says

      It’s an opinion essay with a direct question. “what, in your opinion, …”. It does not say “discuss both sides”.
      All the best

  110. http://cohail says

    please apologize me for disobeying the rules of your. I noticed you have given band scores for other students that is why I posted my writing. please give me a band score for my writing . If you don’t offer free marking service, then I can pay for you, tell me how much.
    If you don’t have time, please tell me when you can have time to give me a band score.

    • http://Liz says

      I’m sorry but I don’t offer any essay marking service, paid or unpaid. I don’t have time. If you need detailed feedback, you need to find an IELTS teacher to help you. My work is based on providing free lessons, tips and advice on this blog and making complete training videos for IELTS which will soon be available to buy.
      All the best

  111. http://Wahid says

    Hello Liz, here is my another essay based on direct question module, Please pass your comment on the following points.
    *introduction and thesis statement.
    *idea development and sentence structure.
    * and organization.

    here is the essay statement:
    As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
    what factors contribute to job satisfaction?
    How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

    here goes my essay:

    Being satisfied with a job is considered to be a prominent factor of ones welfare, therefore many people devote most of their adulthood to professional life. In my opinion, there are many ways to achieving job satisfaction. However, satisfaction is not realized by everyone.
    Firstly, in order to be happy with your job and organization, one has to look for a position with which his education, personality, interpersonal skills and experience match. Secondly, a person is satisfied when he feels that he is contributing toward the attainment of organization goals or he is doing something good for his society and people. Thirdly, receiving positive feedback from his supervisors for performing valuable tasks, and sense of appreciation from his colleagues and teammates. And finally, opportunities to growth and personal development such as trainings, and workshops also leads to job satisfaction.
    On the other hand, there are people who are dissatisfied and do not show any interest in their jobs. The reasons for not being happy with their jobs could be not working in a right position where their qualifications and personalities do not match the requirements of the job or the task they perform can be repetitive and boring. Further, a person may show dissatisfaction due to the diversified culture of organization which require great amount of flexibility and he can not adjust with or a culture where performance is not appreciated by top level managers.
    In conclusion, job satisfaction does play an immense role in the wellbeing of a person, satisfaction is achieved through having a desired job, appreciation from supervisors and through development opportunities in a organization. However, there are people who are not happy neither with their work nor with the organization.

  112. http://cohail says

    Dear Liz,

    I did so much practice as you said and improved my time management but I am unsure about the band score I could get. So, could you please check the my report and essay below.
    I assume this as my real exam and I want you to mark each task and give a band score as the real IELTS examiners would do.

    If there is any spelling, punctuation, word or any other mistakes, do kindly deduct marks if the real examiners would do so. I want to know my band score as if in the real test.

    Task 1

    you should about 20 minutes in this task

    The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into 3 categories, from 2001 to 2008.

    Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

    Write at least 150 words

    The relevant chart is on this web address –


    ( I am sorry I didn’t know how to post a bar chart on this page, please log into that web address to have the chart. I need to know my total band score, so, please mark my task 1. As a teacher, I hope you will definitely do this help for me and my report is below)

    The bar chart illustrates the number of minutes of telephone calls in Australia by 3 categories (local, national and international, mobiles) from 2001 to 2008. The number of minutes of telephone calls in total have increased steadily and strongly for national and international and mobiles, while for local calls, it has made no changes over the period.

    To begin, in 2001, local telephone calls were spoken much longer at 72 billion minutes. This increased dramatically to a peak of 90 billion minutes by 2005, which the decreased to 72 billion minutes at the end of the period.

    National and international calls started at 38 million minutes an increased gradually to record 61 billion minutes of telephone calls in 2008. The number of minutes of mobile phone calls started at a very low number of minutes at 2 billion. This number, however, increased steadily to stand at 46 billion minutes by 2008, which was 23 times higher than where it started.

    Task 2

    With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.

    To what extent do you agree?

    Increasing use of internet and text messaging for communications, will make face to face interaction a thing of past. In my opinion, I completely agree that electronic communication has posed a barrier in face to face interaction.

    One main reason why face to face communication is hindered by e-communication is because many people find e-communication as an easier way to communicate with others, wherever, they are in this world. Consequently, young as well as old people are adapting to this method. For instance, a person uses e-mail, skype or facebook to contact with someone in another place instead of face-to face interaction.

    Another point under consideration is the lacking ability to interact face to face in coming years. More and more people are adapting to e-communication methods such as internet chat and text messaging. As a result, they could lack the ability to communicate with a real person. Especially, younger generations are affected through this in many ways. One way is that, younger generations use e-communication methods extensively, so that, they would do the same when they reach adulthood. Therefore, in the future, face to face interaction may become a thing of past. Moreover, the e-communication technology and mechanisms would further develop in the coming years which means face to face communication would decline even more. For instance, viber could be treated as a new version of skype. It made video chat through internet more cheap to use.

    In conclusion, extensive use of e-communication methods such as skype, facebook, etc, is likely to make face to face communication a method, invalid in the future. It is seemingly a better approach for individuals to maintain a balance between e-communication and face to face communication.

    • http://Liz says

      For your bar chart, the key is to put all key features in the overview. You failed to mention which types of calls where most common of the period and which were the least. Also please check your English language to avoid errors, for example ” local telephone calls were spoken… “. Please read the rules for posting writing on this blog. I don’t offer a free marking service: http://ieltsliz.com/rules-for-posting-writing/
      All the best

  113. http://cohail says

    Dear Liz,

    I need to send you a bar chart, can you please provide your e-mail address?

    • http://Liz says

      Unfortunately, I don’t have time to give more feedback than I offer on this blog.
      All the best

  114. http://cohail says

    Dear Liz,

    I find it so difficult to manage my time in IELTS academic writing task 1 and task 2. I couldn’t complete my exam properly due to lack of time although I’am performing good in all 4 marking criteria. I could be successful only if I know how to manage the time.

    Please help me with time management in IELTS

    • http://Liz says

      Time management improves when you have plenty of ideas prepared for writing task 2 and you have trained to apply them. Also you should have a clear strategy for each type of task in writing task 1. Unfortunately, timing is something that only you can improve through focused training and practice.
      All the best

  115. http://cohail says

    Thank you for your reply. Can you please examine the sample body paragraph below?

    On the other hand, it is often thought that children should learn to compete rather than work together and I agree. To be more precise, the globe has now become excessively competitive and , therefore, it is better for a child to learn to compete in order to succeed in the future. For instance, a businessman has to face a number of competitions from other businessmen to survive in the market ,in this case, competitive skills, a child has learnt will be undeniably useful.

    Also, please check the below paragraph, so that you can compare which is correct.

    On the other hand, it is often thought that children should learn to compete rather than work together and I agree. To be more precise, the globe has now become excessively competitive and , therefore, it is better for a child to learn to compete in order to succeed in the future according to some. For instance, a businessman has to face a number of competitions from other businessmen to survive in the market ,in this case, some people think that competitive skills, a child has learnt will be undeniably useful.

    My exact question- Is it correct or wrong to use words such as ” according to some, some people think…….” after giving my opinion, like I have used in the second paragraph.

    I anticipate your guidelines

    • http://Liz says

      You don’t need to keep referring to some people in the body because it also contains your opinion. Also be careful using the word “globe”. It can not be used to paraphrase the word “world” in all contexts. Please watch my video about paraphrasing which you will find in the vocabulary section.

  116. http://cohail says

    hello miss Liz,

    If I am re-instating my opinion in the second body paragraph then do I need to give the opinion at the beginning of the body paragraph? And my second question is in this case do I need to give details to justify my opinion as if I am writing a separate opinion paragraph? If you have supported that soft skills and experience are more important than university education in getting a job, how could you have written your opinion in a separate body paragraph and with the second body paragraph, can you please provide a model?

    I anticipate your kind verification

    • http://Liz says

      I’m not clear about your first question. If you agree with one side, then mention that in the body paragraph for that side. Personally I would mention it at the start of the paragraph to help the reader remember, for example “On the other hand, it is often thought that children should learn to compete rather than work together and I agree“. If you have a different view to that of the sides offered (a balanced approach), then you need a separate paragraph.

  117. http://Deyasini%20Mitra says

    Dear Liz, I will be appearing for my IELTS exam shortly. If time permits for you, can you please evaluate my essay. Many thanks in advance.

    Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
    Discuss both views and give your opinion.

    In today’s world, more and more students are opting for studying in a university. The completion of university education is an important milestone for them. While many believe that the sole purpose of university education is to increase job prospects for graduates, others are of the opinion that individuals and societies benefit in broader ways from it. In this essay, both sides of this debate will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
    On the one hand, most people think that studying in a university increases a student’s chances of securing better jobs. As an illustration, almost all educational institutions have placement committees that schedule campus interviews and invite the top organizations to visit their colleges and select students for job placements in their companies. Such hiring of graduates improves their future career prospects. Thus, it is understandable why this point of view has garnered support.
    On the other hand, there are individuals who believe that university education has other advantages. For instance, almost all students have to live away from home, in a college hostel, to complete their course in a university. This develops independence, confidence and socialism in the students. As a result, they grow up to be more mature human beings. In addition, university programmes improves the intellect of students and countries can prosper from the contribution such graduates can make to the society. Therefore, it is clear why some people support this point of view.
    The above discussion puts forth several convincing arguments for both sides of the debate. However, after analyzing these two points of view, it is unambiguous that university education is a precursor to a better job and a fulfilling career. It is therefore expected that more and more students complete university to enhance their job opportunities.

    • http://Liz says

      Firstly, this sentence has no significance in IELTS writing task 2 ” In this essay, both sides of this debate will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.”. The examiner knows what you plan to do because IELTS gave you the instructions. Please watch my video about how to write a proper introduction for IELTS – see my writing task 2 video lessons.
      Secondly, the instructions ask you to discuss and also give your opinion. Where is your opinion? It is equally important as the discussion. Please see my model discussion essay.
      Thirdly, please watch my video about linking devices to start your conclusion.
      All in all, you write well but your IELTS skills need work.

  118. http://Gunjan says

    Dear LIz,
    I need your comments in evaluating my following essay on same topic :-

    Modern technology, such as personal computers and the Internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

    Essay :-

    Advancement in new age technology like computers and internet has provided many employees an option of operating from the comforts of their home, at least part time, rather than reporting at the workplace daily .This essay examines the advantages and disadvantages of this scenario.

    The opportunity to work from home provides employees the flexibility to manage a better balance between their professional and personal lives. This acts as a motivation and results in increased productivity. For instance, many working mothers find it useful, since they can adjust their schedule to match their family needs. It also results in less or no travel time for the employees . Employees can also save money by cutting down on office space and infrastructure requirement.

    However, the work from home situation can also have some drawbacks .The employee get less opportunity to interact with their team members and thus it can affect team work. Productivity can also get affected if employee focus diverts from work to house chores.

    To conclude, work from home situation has both advantages and disadvantages but is a really good option to support sincere employees who are facing challenging times at personal front and need more flexibility.

    • http://Liz says

      Try to develop both body paragraphs equally. Your score is also calculated on how you develop and extend ideas. Furthermore, check how to write a thesis statement for this type of essay. See my model.
      All the best

  119. http://Suresh%20Kumar%20Gupta says

    Hi Liz

    I am going to appear in IELTS (GT) coming Thursday. I need you help in assessing and giving your opinion on my essay writing. I am targeting a band score of 7 plus. I am trying developing my writing skills as per the guidelines and instructions in ieltsliz.com

    Modern technology, such as personal computers and the Internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

    Here goes my essay :-

    Now a days, many advanced communication methods are available through computers and internet, to remain connected with your workplace and customers, even when you are not in your office. This is really helping many who prefer to work from home. This essay will examine some of the positives and negatives of working from home.

    There are advantages to both the employee as well as employers. Firstly, there is cost saving for the companies as working from home for some days in a week will reduce the burden of employee overhead costs like seating space, furniture, refreshments, etc. Secondly, the employees prefer it because it gives them a chance to spend more time with their families as travel time to office and back is cut down completely. This improves their efficiency as well. Finally, for the working mothers, this is of immense help, as they can also take care of their children in between, while working from home.
    Having said these, there are few drawbacks of this situation as well. Many consider that it leads to unorganized working and there are chances to miss important calls and business decisions. This can cost heavily to the companies. Others are of the view that maintaining work discipline will be a challenge as employees will be exposed to two kinds of work places. Sometimes, employee family may not like him to work from home and expect his full attention at home. This can lead to confrontations, many times.
    To conclude, while there are advantages of working from home for few days in a week, it should not be at the cost of compromising work output. Basis job requirements and employees’ specific needs, an optimum balance needs to be maintained for doing office work while at office and from home.

    Need your comments, please.


    Suresh Gupta

    • http://Liz says

      Hi Suresh,

      It’s a good essay. You’ve given very strong ideas and explained them well. Here are points which you can improve:

      1. Avoid using “you” and write about “people” instead.
      2. Don’t tell the examiner what you will do “this essay will explain the advantages …”. Of course this essay will do that. The examiner knows what you plan to do. But the examiner doesn’t know your ideas. So, introduce your ideas. “While there are advantages to both employees and employers, it could also lead to problems of disorganisation at work.” Now you have introduced your ideas.
      3. Use correct punctuation “seating space, furniture, refreshments, etc.” = “seating space, furniture and refreshments”
      4. Use appropriate linking. “like” = “such as”. “Having said these” = “On the other hand”.
      All the best

      • http://Suresh%20Kumar%20Gupta says

        Thanks a lot Liz for the quick response and valuable inputs…

        Hope with these suggested improvements- I can target 7 plus

        Thanks again !

  120. http://Wahid says

    Hello Liz, I would like you to comment on the introduction and thesis part of the following discussion essay.

    It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

    here is my background introduction and thesis statement:
    It is considered in general that some successful people are born naturally talented and some are not while some believe that every child can be an expert in his own field through consistent struggle and hard work.

    • http://Liz says

      The problem is that you failed to post the instructions with the essay question. Did the instructions say “Discuss both sides and give your opinion.”? If those are the instructions, where is your opinion. You are asked to do two tasks – 1. discuss both sides 2. give your opinion. You introduce both in your introduction. Please read my model essay mode carefully to learn how to do this.
      All the best

      • http://Wahid says

        Hello again, yes the instructions do say “Discuss both sides and give your opinion. and sorry i had forgotten to put my opinion, here i again post the introduction and my opinion.

        “It is considered in general that some successful people are born naturally talented and some are not while some believe that every child can be an expert in his own field through consistent struggle and hard work. In my opinion, I believe that every person is gifted with natural skills while passion, continuous endeavor and great effort are more important for reaching the high levels of success. ”

        thank you

        • http://Liz says

          The only problem is that I can’t see a clear opinion. It looks like you are trying to agree with both sides to avoid giving an opinion. Your opinion must be 100% clear.

          • http://Wahid says

            is my opinion clear now?

            In my opinion, becoming a successful person need not to be blessed with natural skills however, passion, continuous endeavor and great effort are the guaranteed ways of reaching the high levels of success.

            Please check it one more time and do write your model introduction and thesis statement for this discussion question.

            thank you for your patience.

            • http://Liz says

              That’s much better. It’s always important to keep your language very clear in the thesis statement so the examiner can understand fully.

              • http://Wahid says

                Good Evening Liz, here is my complete essay, I would like to go through it and give your comments on weak points.

                “It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.”
                Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

                what I have written is:

                It is considered in general that certain successful people such as athletes or musicians are blessed with natural abilities, and others are not while oftentimes it is argued that every child can become an expert in his own field through persistent struggle, and hard work. In my opinion, I believe that a savvy of his own stream need not to be born with innate abilities, however one can acquire the desired talent through continuous endeavor, passion and guidance.

                On one hand, there are people who are naturally talented in their fields for example sportsmen, musicians, or businessmen. These skills could be inherited from their parents or grandparents, because it is medically proved that genetics play an important role in the mindset and ability of a child. If one of the parents is a great musician his son or grandson could inherit the skills of his father of grandfather.

                On the other hand, any normal human being can attain the high levels of success through devotion, tireless efforts and training. Being expert in a field require guidance from a coach or instructor, goal setting, careful planning and continuous exercise. For instance, if some wants to write 90 words per minute on a computer keyboard then he needs to do careful planning and should practice daily to attain the target.

                In my personal opinion, passion for a field, careful training and coaching can make any child professional in his own work.

                To Conclude, professionalism require great deal of effort, time and smart goal setting. Those with innate ability or born naturally talented also need to be guided by some trainers and devote much of their time to daily practice.

                • http://Liz says

                  It is exceedinly odd that you decided to put your opinion in a separate paragraph and only write one sentence for it. You get a good score for developing ideas not just stating them in one sentence. Either put your opinion together with the side you agree with or give more detail. Whatever you decide, you can’t have a main point with no supporting points. Also please be careful with using capital letters.

                • http://Wahid says

                  Thank you very much Liz for your valuable comments. I will your advice for further improvements.

                  Thank you,

  121. http://Diana says

    Some people support the opinion that students should be rewarded for outstanding academic performance, while there are others who think they should be awarded for the strides they have made. In my opinion, I believe that recognizing students for both extraordinary performance and progress made will definitely boost their results.

    On the one hand, it is commonly believed that honouring students for remarkable grades is a highly effective tactic to inspire them to soar, because it builds self-confidence and prepares them for future steps and opportunities. Grading is vital and essential to evaluate students as it assesses their ability and intelligence. When students attain high scores they automatically become eligible to compete for merit-based scholarships and other perks that comes with exemplary performance.

    On the other hand, it can also be argued that tangible rewards motivate learners to continuously find ways to improve their grades because there is increased competition. Consistent incentive learning is often thought of as the most prevalent extrinsic motivator used in schools today as it drives academic performance and builds morale. When students are praised for their accomplishments it inspires them to work diligently reach their full potential.

    Finally, in my opinion, I believe that students who demonstrate extraordinary scholastic achievement deserve to be recognized along with students who are working assiduously to improve their results because they both encourage students to strive for academic success.

    In conclusion, both being outstanding and making progress bolster scholastic performance and should continually be awarded.

    • http://Diana says

      Hi Liz,

      Sorry about sending without a greeting but my computer was acting strange.

      Kindly peruse the above and provice tips.

      Thanks much.

    • http://Liz says

      Unfortunately, this opinion doesn’t work. If you were a governor of a school and you had to decide how students were assessed, it would be hard to have both. You must have a clear opinion, you can’t sit on the fence. A balanced approach doesn’t mean agreeing with both sides. It means presenting a clear, specific opinion which is neither one side or the other – for that reason it is called balanced because it’s not extreme (it’s not one sided).

      Some essay titles are easy to write a balanced approach for. Here’s an example: “Some people think that parents have more impact on their child’s academic performance than a teacher. To what extent do you agree or disagree?” A one sided approach chooses either parents or teachers. A balanced approach doesn’t say “I think both parents and teachers are influential“. It should be “I think parents are influential in a child’s early stages but a teacher is more influential once they reach the age of five and above”. Now we have a clear opinion. It is a clear position.

      So, for the essay you have written, I personally would have gone for the one sided approach. Or you could have gone for a balanced approach saying “I think assessing progress is better for younger children but exam assessment is better for older children”. ( the explanation will be that older children need to get used to the pressure that exams give because it is part of their training for their future.).

      I hope that helps.

  122. http://Nishan says

    Hi Liz,

    while answering the above question , If I backed idea of university education being better and wrote …
    One paragraph describing why uni education is good
    and …another paragraph describing how the other point : Soft skills and Experience , is disadvantageous,

    Is there a chance of the examiner deciding that I’m off topic? or rather .. will my task response score less points?



    • http://Liz says

      It sounds completely on track. It’s a clear plan to address all aspects of the essay question by presenting a clear opinion and position. Well done!

      • http://Nishan says

        Thank you…. You made my day!!!!

        I have been struggling to write descent essays due to various reasons. However, I read almost all of your advices and tips and practiced a lot as you advised and I am much more confident in writing an essay now. Also I seem to form more related points in my head when writing an essay. So I’m really grateful .

        One area I have problems with, is my linkers and my vocabulary. Initially, while I experienced issues compiling a good essay I reverted to simple sentences which enabled me to express my ideas more freely. However now I’m slightly worried that my sentences are too simple; Not consisting of an academic vocabulary. Hopefully I can rectify it before the test.

        Thanks again for all your help


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